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mytuesdaywishes Member
since 2003-09-05
Posts 254a voice from the musicbox 
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today i gave my history away wrapped in old newspaper like it meant nothing to me today i fell out of love with a ghost and watched the smoke sink to the floor today no one cared that i cried on the inside today i cut my hand on the razor i created today i bled a little but that's no different than any other day today i missed something that was never quite there today i learned about love today i learned about life today i learned i think that it's brainless to assume that making changes to your window's view will gain a new perspective. |
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GG Member Elite
since 2002-12-03
Posts 3532Lost in thought |
I died a little more today... I'm sad to hear that you did too  excellent post, though. Always, Alyssa - And so it was that time stood still - |
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Rainbowdust Member
since 2002-12-05
Posts 320Sydney, Australia |
"today no one cared that i cried on the inside" it might seem that way, but it doesn't devalue what you've learned or what you felt. i loved this, you described it so well! thanks for sharing  The soul would have no rainbows, had the eyes no tears. |
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Kaoru
since 2003-06-07
Posts 3892where the wild flowers grow |
"today i fell out of love with a ghost" ...wow, nice lines within...and without. |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
sigh I love this |
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angelblueyes Member Elite
since 2003-07-19
Posts 2148Oklahoma |
 This touched me.You know what though?When you think noone's there and noone cares, I do!!!!My spirit, my heart, and my soul are there to help with whatever may come your way.  Crystal |
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