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angelblueyes
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0 posted 2003-10-19 04:59 PM


Lay on your back and look in the sky
See what it is you can find
Look way up into the clouds
Alot of shapes have been found
You might see a truck or a car
You might see a house or a farm
There might be a girl or a boy
There might be a wonderful toy
The clouds they change everytime you look
You might even find a giant book
You might find a princess or a knight
A ball, a bat, or even a trike
Take some time to see what you can see
Because clouds can be so many things

Crystal

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1 posted 2003-10-19 05:05 PM






(smiles) Yay! Oh Crystal, the other day I looked up to the sky and saw a cloud which looked like a swan with a flower held in her beak, yay! (kiss on cheek) God Bless You, sweet friend, this is precious, always dream with the heavens, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Crystal, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

I don't need no proof when it comes to God and truth
I can see the sun set and I perceive

***Live***

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2 posted 2003-10-19 05:28 PM


enjoyed
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3 posted 2003-10-19 06:19 PM


Crystal
That's true, well done.

angelblueyes
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4 posted 2003-10-19 06:56 PM


Noah:Thank you.I'll continue to dream with the ehavens and look toward the sky.You do the same my friend.

vandana:Glad you enjoyed.

Sy:Thank you.I love clouds.

Crystal

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5 posted 2003-10-19 07:58 PM


Crystal~
From one true cloud-watcher to another,
I LOVE THIS~
*Huglets*
~*Marge*~

~*When the heart grieves over what it has lost,
the spirit rejoices over what it has left.
- Sufi epigram
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Martie
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6 posted 2003-10-19 08:00 PM


Crystal...Clowds are wonderful to look at...enjoyed this very much!
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7 posted 2003-10-19 09:59 PM


Hello Crystal

I agree......the possibilities are endless when it comes to cloud watching.  I really enjoyed this.

Take care......Sue

I am in motion
I am blue
Love is an ocean
I'm anchored in you
- Shawn Mullins

ThisDiamond
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8 posted 2003-10-19 10:07 PM


Clouds are magical Crystal...
You brought the child into the funhouse.
Nice write. TD

angelblueyes
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9 posted 2003-10-20 08:59 AM


Marge:I'm very glad you enjoyed this.

Martie:Glad I coul bring you a little joy.

Sue:Glad I could make you smile.

TD:I enjoy things like this.It kinda brings back the childhood I never had.

Crystal

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10 posted 2003-10-20 11:21 AM


Dear fellow cloud-gazer, I loved this!

Loves 'n hugs,
Linda

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11 posted 2003-10-20 11:35 AM


very peaceful... hugsssss

Lauren~

Will the wind ever remember
the names it has blown in the past
with its crutch, its old age, and its
wisdom it whispers no this won't be the last

angelblueyes
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12 posted 2003-10-20 11:38 AM


Linda:I enjoyed this one.It's one of my lighter side writes.

Lauren:Thank you.Glad you enjoyed.

Crystal

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13 posted 2003-10-20 11:50 AM


Simple and sweet..also it reminded me of the Blind melon lyric

..look up way to the sky
when youre deepest thoughts are broken
keep on dreamin boy
cause when you stop dreamin it's time to die

l@ve that song

..and then one day you find..ten years have got behind you..no one told you when to run..you missed the starting gun..

angelblueyes
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14 posted 2003-10-20 11:52 AM


Aenemial:Thank you.I love that song too.

Crystal

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15 posted 2003-10-21 04:01 AM


The shapes and the colors can be a beauty to behold...I liked the shapes of the clouds in the French movie "Amelie".   James
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16 posted 2003-10-21 04:06 AM


hehe this takes me back when I was little, and I would lay in the shade of a tree in summer, and just look, and look. I found a lamb one time, other things, too. Thanks for taking me back.
Love,
Terri~

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17 posted 2003-10-21 04:11 AM


I think I may take your advice

a wonderfully delightful poem here Crystal

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18 posted 2003-10-21 09:55 AM


The clouds are beautiful to look at. Especially when it is sunny and bright.
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