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Ceinwyn
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0 posted 2003-10-19 02:44 PM


do you miss me?
when you stare
into her eyes...
do you taste me?
when you're lying
in her arms...
do you hunger for me?
when you begin
to hate her
do you linger when you think of me?
when you grow tired
of her...
do you find yourself denying me?
when you're caught up
in your thoughts
do you find yourself tripping over my fragance...
when you're kissing her....?


If at first you don't succeed destroy all the evidence that you tried.

© Copyright 2003 Kristen Brandon - All Rights Reserved
angelblueyes
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1 posted 2003-10-19 02:46 PM


Many questions that I know we've all asked ourselves after a love is gone.Let me knnow if you find the answers.
Crystal

Sunshine
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2 posted 2003-10-20 11:00 AM



Oh, Very good!

Marge Tindal
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3 posted 2003-10-20 11:21 AM


Kristen~
This is really GOOD~
You will stir the memories of many with this penning~
*Huglets*
~*Marge*~

~*When the heart grieves over what it has lost,
the spirit rejoices over what it has left.
- Sufi epigram
   noles1@totcon.com     

KoKo
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4 posted 2003-10-20 11:24 AM


I'm soooo saving this!!!!!!

I do not know whether I was then a man dreaming I was a butterfly, or whether I am now a butterfly dreaming I am a man.
--Chang Tzu

Earth Angel
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5 posted 2003-10-20 11:25 AM


Oh, I don't want to go back there! Egads those times really hurt.

~ But those feelings have passed! --and now I couldn't care less! Time is indeed a great healer!

Loving, healing hugs,
Linda


Susan Caldwell
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6 posted 2003-10-20 11:32 AM


Nice write!

"if you won't let me fall for you
then you won't see the best that I would love to do for you"
~Dido~

Aenimal
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7 posted 2003-10-20 11:45 AM


unless he's an idiot.. pro'ly
vandana
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8 posted 2003-10-20 04:23 PM


enjoyed
bsquirrel
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9 posted 2003-10-20 04:24 PM


Wow... The raw wound of your words.

Oh, I'm back.

gemjop
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10 posted 2003-10-21 05:55 PM


Kris!

Oh gawd, another of your best....ooooh this ooozes something, i dunno, but i want some!

into my library.

~I wanna live, I wanna give, I've been a miner for a heart of gold~  Neil Young

littlewing
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since 2003-03-02
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11 posted 2003-10-21 11:04 PM


Good God in Heaven Kris
reading my mind from afar . . .
I think about this all the time
grrrrr . . .
yes I do and you know?
I often wonder if they do?
Ok this one hurted
xxoo

Mistletoe Angel
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12 posted 2003-10-21 11:26 PM




(sigh) Oh Kristen, this is very heartfelt, sweet friend, my heart goes out to you and I surely feel that feelings of loss seem to reciprocate with other relations! (big hugggsssssss) I send angel hugs your way, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Kristen, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

I don't need no proof when it comes to God and truth
I can see the sun set and I perceive

***Live***

mytuesdaywishes
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13 posted 2003-12-28 03:18 AM


good questions....often don't get answers.

joy has its own justice. and dreams are languid and lawless. and everything bows to beauty, when it's fierce and when it's flawless...

passing shadows
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14 posted 2004-02-22 11:13 PM



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