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LeeJ
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0 posted 2003-10-19 01:02 PM


Absorbing the blows, I wait upon some verbal roundhouse
Hearing strange & beguiling melodies, I’ve heard periodically, all my life
But I never listened…before?
Pieces of Sun chip off and sedate me
Discounting the cost, not caring how effective or ineffective it might be
There’s love knocking into my soul with sturdy fabric
So, of course, I opened the door leaving him in?

I’m van Gogh, intensely creating new colors
Thistledown gases of mathematical cavities
Where nothing is fine tuned to the times pouring like red wine
Summer nights become nostalgic, worth every moment of rhyme

And for once, weeding the crops brought them well nourished
Redefined in all hours articulating centuries of sage
Hallowed be any depreciation, revealing vibrations of the heart
And rich will be another day

© Copyright 2003 Lee J. - All Rights Reserved
Mystic One
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1 posted 2003-10-19 01:22 PM


Very beautifully written
angelblueyes
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Oklahoma
2 posted 2003-10-19 01:46 PM


Lady you amaze me everytime.
Crystal

Goldenrose
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3 posted 2003-10-20 06:58 AM


''i'm Van Gogh intensely creating new colours''...i like this line...creating colours from words..to iluminate the readers minds..and also to bring to the readers the ''senses'' is something poets often overlook..but it is a basic prerequiste..thank you for the words....

Goldenrose.

''Each soul is potentialy divine..the goal is to manifest that divinity''

Seymour Tabin
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Tamarac Fla
4 posted 2003-10-20 09:18 AM


LeeJ
Excellent my dear, you can't miss.

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