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dingusjr
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0 posted 2003-10-19 08:44 AM



A. leaned heavily against a tree
digging at his manhood
with deep grunts of satisfaction.

E. was perched on a limb of the tree
chattering feverishly
as befitted her gentle sex.

They couldn't figure it.
They were just like the others.
They wore the same clothes (nothing).
They spoke the same language.
They ate the same food.

Yet, they were outcasts.

Perhaps it was their absence of tails.

© Copyright 2003 Larry W. Allen - All Rights Reserved
Seymour Tabin
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1 posted 2003-10-19 09:42 AM


dingusjr
Perhaps, enjoyed the read

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2 posted 2003-10-19 10:32 AM


Oh yeah....and they still don't get it! Thank you, bro Larry -- your poetry always straightens my bends.

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Martie
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3 posted 2003-10-19 11:14 PM



Sadelite
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4 posted 2003-10-20 05:18 PM


Clever write.   Much enjoyed.
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mytuesdaywishes
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5 posted 2003-10-20 07:01 PM


haha, clever...and unique...what goes through that head of yours hehe

i think that it's brainless to assume that making changes to your window's view will gain a new perspective.

dingusjr
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6 posted 2003-10-20 07:03 PM


Sometimes I wonder.
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