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Open Poetry #29

Dear Sister, Oh Sister

PouringJewels
Member

since 2003-09-18

Posts 158
Maryland

0 posted 2003-10-19 08:07 AM

Ed, you told me to get out my very old writings, So
here is one.

     Dear sister, Oh sister, so much we've been through.
     Together this life, we held on and grew.
Guidence and love, what happened to her?
     Punishment and conferences with our only Sir.

     Dear sister, Oh sister, much better a friend.
We live by the sun and blow with the wind.
     Look at our past when life was so young.
Now it seems songs are differently sung.

     Dear sister, Oh sister, should I attempt to explain?
     This life we've lead, the strength and the pain.
     Half is over and much is unlived.
Back pages of memories and much more to give.
           1/26/74

Susan Caldwell
Member Rara Avis

since 2002-12-27

Posts 8348
Florida

1 posted 2003-10-19 08:11 AM

Julia,

This is sweet and leaves me wondering what happened..

I can't wait for more posts!

"if you won't let me fall for you
then you won't see the best that I would love to do for you"
~Dido~

wranx
Member Elite

since 2002-06-07

Posts 3689
Moved from a shack to a barn

2 posted 2003-10-19 02:09 PM

Thanks Julia, For this glimpse of you and your thoughts for our other sibling...
Glad you found this! Takes me back to a time.

Love ya
Brother Ed

angelblueyes
Member Elite

since 2003-07-19

Posts 2148
Oklahoma

3 posted 2003-10-19 02:10 PM

Thank you for sharing a moment of your past with us.

Crystal

littlewing
Member Rara Avis

since 2003-03-02

Posts 9655
New York

4 posted 2003-10-20 11:54 AM

Julia . . .
for some strange reason I read this with Dylan playing in my head . . .
*smile*
is nice to be grateful indeed
xxoo

littlewing
Member Rara Avis

since 2003-03-02

Posts 9655
New York

5 posted 2003-10-22 02:00 PM

breathing this . . .

Enchantress
Member Empyrean

since 2001-08-14

Posts 35113
Canada eh.

6 posted 2003-10-22 02:10 PM

Excellent write Julia!
I look forward to more.
~Hugs~

~Autumn, the year's last, loveliest smile~

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