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serenity blaze
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0 posted 2003-10-19 08:03 AM



shimmer
shiv the christmas
tree
distancing
these memories
aluminum
and plasticene
waiting for a hot bulb fire
there
within
a green paint spire
in a splotch
of clarity
a "Y"
is there
in disconnect
and the dark reds
waiting--flared--
this one tinkles bells
on ear...notes in gather
like gazelle
prancing prairies no regret--
not a neck bends back.


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Susan Caldwell
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1 posted 2003-10-19 08:15 AM


Good Morning Karen!!



You made me think about Christmas...yuck.

But other than that I am lost..*sigh* I am still sick..so I can still use that as an excuse...

"if you won't let me fall for you
then you won't see the best that I would love to do for you"
~Dido~

serenity blaze
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2 posted 2003-10-19 08:37 AM


grin...christmas and sick being the two operative words?

yer doin' FINE.

chuckle.


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3 posted 2003-10-19 10:58 AM


Wow -- just wow! I read the first half of this, and just went back to start over. Wasn't ready for the depth, had to switch from snorkel to scuba.....

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Seymour Tabin
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4 posted 2003-10-19 11:03 AM


serenity,
And the tiger shows a sparkle in his eye.

ethome
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5 posted 2003-10-19 12:00 PM


I never know what you're writing about exactly but I always love the passion in your work.......

Merry every day of the year to you!!!


Thick Eric~~~~~

Ain't doin nothin at all
Just answerin the call
Kinda driftin away from it all~~~~~

angelblueyes
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6 posted 2003-10-19 03:32 PM


Yeah!!Thanks for a view of Christmas.I love Christmas and everything about it.
Crystal

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7 posted 2003-10-19 03:58 PM




(smiles) Hehehe, Christmas makes me sick, after all, mistletoe is a parasite and love is a parasite to me and we always must spread the virus of sharing and giving! (big hugggsssssss) God Bless You, sweet friend, I love it, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Karen, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

I don't need no proof when it comes to God and truth
I can see the sun set and I perceive

***Live***

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