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KristieSue
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0 posted 2003-10-18 10:57 PM



risky business
a game i play
to win or lose
no matter cost

all n' all out
a war it is
seeking the weak
choking out life

no price too high
no name too great
admit you're done
my life, my game

Ya know what they say.  Curiosity salted the snail.

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1 posted 2003-10-18 11:26 PM


I really liked it. Powerful write.

Cold hands means a warm heart

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2 posted 2003-10-18 11:26 PM


Hugsssss hon, hang in there there are brighter days ahead....PEACE


Lauren~

Will the wind ever remember
the names it has blown in the past
with its crutch, its old age, and its
wisdom it whispers no this won't be the last

KristieSue
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3 posted 2003-10-20 02:49 AM


Thanks you guys...just venting.

Ya know what they say.  Curiosity salted the snail.

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