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dingusjr
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0 posted 2003-10-18 08:50 PM


It was her lips..

the kind to die for,

moist and full...

So wonderful you hardly

saw the rest of the woman.

She let me watch them

while she filled out my deposit.

Lips slightly parted,

the tips of her teeth showing,

red lips and a smile.

Ginsberg had his grocery boys

and Ratledge his waitress.

I have this bank teller.....

[This message has been edited by dingusjr (10-18-2003 09:14 PM).]

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1 posted 2003-10-18 08:52 PM


Smiling at this....
~Hugs~

~Autumn, the year's last, loveliest smile~

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2 posted 2003-10-19 11:50 AM


Yer an evil man, Larry -- welcome to the club!

It's all part of being a Happy Mutant, that taking of tiny and innocuous pleasures that cause no harm and sometimes give us the joy of laughing at ourselves.

Here's the record of my downfall, in case anybody missed it....
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Magnus
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3 posted 2003-10-19 12:30 PM


I know of this...quite well...the subtle
little delicacies.

Excellent write, thank you.

angelblueyes
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4 posted 2003-10-19 03:05 PM


For every man it's a different part of a woman.Glad you found yours.
Crystal

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5 posted 2003-10-19 03:24 PM



That's it?
You're not going to share more?
Scoundral!

garysgirl
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6 posted 2003-10-19 03:31 PM



Isn't it something what we women
can do to you guys?? We sure do
have fun doing it, too!!
  

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7 posted 2003-10-19 07:19 PM


LOL... I enjoyed this thoroughly... and the revisit to Ratleader's restaurant. *G* You give us a peek at the ladies... and the poets as well. *S*
Martie
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8 posted 2003-10-19 07:58 PM


Larry...I enjoyed this ...it got me thinking about parts of bodies that I admire in men.  I gotta say it's the eyes.
dingusjr
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9 posted 2003-10-19 08:05 PM


really Martie?   Wonder what the other ladies think.
Of course I like a variety of ladies parts...but I'm trying to be nice.
Larry

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