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James_A_Fraser Senior Member
since 2003-09-03
Posts 972Out Making Anticlines |
if you ever wonder why there's no answer when you call not that you would or I wouldn't it might be only trouble on the line but maybe just maybe this time there's no line |
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Patricia Member Elite
since 2003-04-06
Posts 2160Missouri |
Well James, you left me in a "whoah." Brief, sharp, to the point, AND VERY, VERY WELL DONE! This is great work. Patricia |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
WOW!! I'm sure they would get the message! Well said! Hugs~ ~Autumn, the year's last, loveliest smile~ |
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Magnus
since 2001-10-10
Posts 14135South Carolina, USA |
Kinda like that feeling, when the phone rings...you pick it up....only silence.. and then...the dial tone finally appears.. And you are left wondering...was it? Excellent write James, thank you.. |
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James_A_Fraser Senior Member
since 2003-09-03
Posts 972Out Making Anticlines |
Hi, P & E & M! That's the kind of thing that a person would hope for, but you never can tell. |
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Martie
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
Jamie...I hope you get the gift of a ring soon...being out of order is no fun!  |
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gemjop Member Elite
since 2002-11-18
Posts 2587Pencilveinia, USA |
James...damn...into my library! ~I wanna live, I wanna give, I've been a miner for a heart of gold~ Neil Young |
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IrishDreamer Member
since 2003-10-18
Posts 55Kansas |
Wonderful, I agree with Patricia finished this one and went Woah. ~Angie~ |
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suthern
since 1999-07-29
Posts 20723Louisiana |
We're sorry... the number you have dialed is no longer in service. Sorry. *G* This made me think of so many things... some very sad, some ridiculous (obviously... though at least I did spare you my ET imitation. *G*) So rather than wrap myself into knots trying to detail my thought paths, I'll just join the WHOA crowd... and tell you I like this powerful poem very much. *S* |
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mytuesdaywishes Member
since 2003-09-05
Posts 254a voice from the musicbox |
get right to it....very blunt and resolute, great expression, melikes! :Þ i think that it's brainless to assume that making changes to your window's view will gain a new perspective. |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
I get a very vacant feeling in reading this, a very lonely, echoing sound. Like walking into a room that once saw love, and now dust hugs a few sheets draped over old furniture. Spooky. Thank you. |
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