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serenity blaze
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0 posted 2003-10-18 03:44 AM



sip the amber
spark the cube
glass held
in a pouting frame
twirl the girl
rotisserie
see the secrets
swirling same
ribbons
in release of hair
flowing soft
on shoulder speak
on a mound
of snow adrift
with the goosebump
waiting there--
knowing that
his finger calls
A cherry blush
in bloom
she stalls--
and licks the beads
of sweat from lip
beneath the hood
of cobra neck
thralling
to be seen
she sighed

begging

in a part of hips
glossy frost
fingertips
just a bit of tongue and grip
sucking whites
of teeth too dry
houselights
and a bad eye lined

pooling down the cheek

she lies

glitterdrift

and tug of string
puppets can do anything
trumpets
rip the cord and sing

watch her take the slack...


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passing shadows
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1 posted 2003-10-18 03:52 AM


yes...puppets can do anything

sigh

Susan Caldwell
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2 posted 2003-10-18 06:46 AM


Puppets can't feel..

I loved this Karen..but then again I love everything you write..even when it zooms right over my head...

Love ya!

Susan

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3 posted 2003-10-18 06:53 AM



wranx
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4 posted 2003-10-19 02:16 PM


A beauty witch!

Just a lovely telling

~yeti

angelblueyes
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5 posted 2003-10-19 02:18 PM


Your writes always bring me such imagination.
Crystal

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6 posted 2003-10-19 04:13 PM




(smiles) For a puppet to be able to bend its limbs so flexibly and dance effortlessly, there is no doubt they can do anything! (kiss on cheek) God Bless You, sweet friend, somehow I envy them ever so much, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Karen, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

I don't need no proof when it comes to God and truth
I can see the sun set and I perceive

***Live***

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7 posted 2003-10-19 05:37 PM


nice
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