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rhyme time
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since 2003-10-17
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0 posted 2003-10-18 01:58 AM


every single night i go to bed
with so much stuff going thru my head

i really dont know what i dream about
maybe of a world where no one screams and shouts

all i know is when i am in my bed
i say all the things that ought to be said

like black and whites should be treated the same
and indians and arabs shouldnt get any blame

because all of us are here for one simple cause
and no one of us can say we have no flaws

if some people would just get along
people would do less things considered to be wrong

im not saying the world will be some perfect place
not a dream world thats lined all in lace

jus that next time i lay in my bed
i wont have such awful things running thru my head
no woman being raped and people found dead
but all of the good things that people have said

so please keep my words in your mind
and see how much happiness we really can find

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Sunshine
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Listening to every heart
1 posted 2003-10-18 03:37 PM



I really understand this.
I can't count the times
I've been tongue-tied,
only to hear the answers
screaming at me from inside my head
once it hits the pillow.

Thank you!

SharaRose
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since 2003-07-19
Posts 2501
Somewhere out there~
2 posted 2003-10-18 05:41 PM


These words seem to be echo in my mind much of the time-----

"because all of us are here for one simple cause
and no one of us can say we have no flaws

if some people would just get along
people would do less things considered to be wrong"

Thank you so much for sharing this. You have no idea how much I needed to read this.

Terri~

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