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Sunshine
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0 posted 2003-10-17 09:38 PM




The Blowing

Gist, dandelion
Blowing in quick winds of time
Letting spirits glow!

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1 posted 2003-10-17 09:54 PM


Makes me think of those days when I would
blow the fluffy tops off...then watch it
scatter to the four winds....ever so
effortlessly...

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2 posted 2003-10-17 09:59 PM


scattering the spirit...what a beautiful expression of peace... hugssss

Lauren~

Will the wind ever remember
the names it has blown in the past
with its crutch, its old age, and its
wisdom it whispers no this won't be the last

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3 posted 2003-10-17 10:04 PM


Lovely....oh so lovely.
Hugs~

~Autumn, the year's last, loveliest smile~

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4 posted 2003-10-18 01:09 AM


I like this Sunshine. It makes me feel restful. Quite lovely.

Remember, if you're not part of the future, you're history!

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5 posted 2003-10-18 01:22 AM



You don't just show the action, you give the experience. Well done.



~~J

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