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SharaRose
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0 posted 2003-10-17 04:52 PM


Undone




I know what you want for me
You want the hate the same as yours
And none could blame you.
I did you wrong, it was wrong,
But it seems you turn it in to a song.
Seizing every hurt you can
singing praises for it's birth
Looking back over our times span,
making sure I find in myself no worth.
Truth is I do deserve to feel your pain.
All of it, but I didn't bring to you pain
without pain of my own.
Words were spoken, harsh,
My pain may have been self-induced
But how was I supposed to know that then?
My being, my mind, my self had been reduced
I was this mistake?
I never purposely meant you harm.
Didn't you know that my heart could break?
If words could tell you how much I wish,
So much so I wish, I could take it all back
It's killing me, but you can't see
What I have done will always be
what I wish could be, undone.


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1 posted 2003-10-17 04:55 PM




(big hugggsssssss) Oh Shara, your most recent poetry has been filled with much angst and heartache, sweet friend, I hope everything is alright, as it is so very true what we could change about it all comes undone but we must start crafting with a different set of twine and yarn and look beyond the soiled portrait! (sad sigh) I send angel comfort hugs your way, sweet friend, God Bless You, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Shara, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

I don't need no proof when it comes to God and truth
I can see the sun set and I perceive

***Live***

Patricia
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2 posted 2003-10-17 07:35 PM


It is about forgiveness, if the other person cannot find it in their heart, you must find it in your own.  Sometimes we must give ourselves what others cannot (will not). Until you can, keep letting the pain go in your own words, words like these.

Patricia

SharaRose
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3 posted 2003-10-17 09:09 PM


Thank you to both of you. I appreciate your caring words. God bless you both. Sending Love to you both.
Love,
Terri~


[This message has been edited by SharaRose (10-17-2003 09:13 PM).]

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4 posted 2003-10-17 09:57 PM


Yes Terri,  forgiveness of others and most
importantly...forgiveness of yourself for
your own mistakes....sometimes we hurt
others and then,  if we are honest...we
learn from it...and we don't make the same
mistake twice.

SharaRose
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5 posted 2003-10-17 10:09 PM


True. But it wasn't done purposely. I also think it goes for both parties. It wasn't a deliberate act, but I don't think that's something partiality will allow people to think about. I lost sight of things, but it wasn't totally unprovoked, either. I've had a few crying spells the last couple of days, and I came to see some things. I blame myself for everything. Ultimately in the end...it does take two. But I still wish I hadn't lost sight, through all the hurt, of the good things this person brougth to my life. And no I wouldn't purposely do it the first time so why would I the second?
Thank you,
Terri~

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6 posted 2003-10-17 10:10 PM


oh terri, i am so sorry you are so sad, i wish there was something i could do to hekp heal your pain...really enjoyed this write

"For those who understand you, no explanation is necessary. For those who don't, none is possible."

SharaRose
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7 posted 2003-10-17 10:16 PM


You have eor...just by being in this comment box with your heartfelt words. A prayer for  this person, and me would be so appreciated. Thank you for reading, and for the comment. I hope you are well.
Love,
Terri~

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