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EvocativeVerse2
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0 posted 2003-10-17 01:59 PM

Mine Eyes Know Sweetness

Mine eyes know sweetness while drinking her in,
My lips they thirst not for wine but a kiss,
I hunger for her touch upon my skin,
O' there is naught as delicious as this.
Need does direct the beating of this heart,
Want keeps the fires midst us ever lit,
Time, oh yea time, it can not tear apart,
The love I'd ever willingly admit.
Hope always watches for come-hither stares,
Affection doth live within her smile,
When with her there's no need to put on airs,
She's made my existence truly worthwhile.
If love had a name it would be Michelle--
--My darling, my dear, my Iowa belle.

Remember, if you're not part of the future, you're history!

© Copyright 2003 Kevin R. Middleton - All Rights Reserved

SharaRose
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1 posted 2003-10-17 02:02 PM

Lovely..cheers!

Terri~

My eyes were open..and still

garysgirl

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2 posted 2003-10-17 02:10 PM

What a beautiful love poem this is, Kevin.
I know that your "Iowa Michele" loves it, too.

Hugs to you both

Ethel

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3 posted 2003-10-17 02:42 PM

bravo... now show it to her!

Sunshine

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Listening to every heart

4 posted 2003-10-17 02:45 PM

Is it too late to change my name?

Enjoyed this, Sir...

froggy
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5 posted 2003-10-17 02:52 PM

Very sweet and beautiful Shakespeare.

I love it.

:-)

Enchantress
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Canada eh.

6 posted 2003-10-17 04:09 PM

Oh my! How beautiful!
Lucky lucky lady!
~Smiles & Hugs, Nancy~

~Autumn, the year's last, loveliest smile~

JamesMichael
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7 posted 2003-10-18 12:10 PM

Enjoyed...James

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8 posted 2003-10-18 02:17 PM

Evocative.....I named my daughter, Michelle...it's a beautiful name...but sounds like you love more than the name. How sweet it is!

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9 posted 2003-10-18 02:24 PM

Very nicely done, a truly fortunate woman
she is to have the touch of your words felt.

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