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Greeneyes

Member Rara Avis

since 2000-09-09

Posts 9903
In Your Poetic Mind

0 posted 2003-10-17 12:04 PM

{Let me dream beneath
    midnights hours
as evening falls}

again of you

now just a soft yielding
to memories   both
endless and complete

I am beyond the
   reach of your veil
standing here
the subtle blue of
sky and sea     fades upon
my cheek

"I crave the image of
   your shirt"
simple touches   in
a room with no light

because I've grown so beautiful to you--

in  shadows
the forest

was    kept

I waited  in  darkness --
    for   loving arms,
soft fingers to dry   tears

there are no stars tonight
I weep for them,

with one raindrop--
winter inched  between us
kept our inner light     from touch

give me peace   with

one gentle kiss,
and again I am gone

between the words {of how}

I need the touch
   and smell of rain

where colors melt

Will the wind ever remember
the names it has blown in the past
with its crutch, its old age, and its
wisdom it whispers no this won't be the last

Sunshine

Administrator

Member Empyrean

since 1999-06-25

Posts 63354
Listening to every heart

1 posted 2003-10-17 12:06 PM

You've grown beautiful
in all ways, Lauren...

Don't ever stop writing!

angelblueyes
Member Elite

since 2003-07-19

Posts 2148
Oklahoma

2 posted 2003-10-17 12:07 PM

This was truly wonderful.I always love the metaphors you use and the insight you bring. I wish I had an ounce of your talent.You keep writing and sharing your wondrous beauty with all.

Crystal

Earth Angel
Member Empyrean

since 2002-08-27

Posts 40215
Realms of Light

3 posted 2003-10-17 12:41 PM

Reading your words could cause a huge meltdown tears, colours, hearts... My goodness, yer goooooood!

Loves 'n hugs,
Linda

Cpat Hair

Member Patricius

since 2001-06-05

Posts 11793

4 posted 2003-10-17 12:44 PM

between the words {of how}

I need the touch
and smell of rain
we all need to be touched.....

as usual, you have impressed me with your word play and form.

Enchantress
Member Empyrean

since 2001-08-14

Posts 35113
Canada eh.

5 posted 2003-10-17 01:08 PM

Oh my...Oh Lauren...
How beautiful this is!!
I am in awe...truly amazing write.
~Smiles & Hugs, Nancy~

~Autumn, the year's last, loveliest smile~

garysgirl

Member Laureate

since 2002-09-29

Posts 19237
Florida, USA

6 posted 2003-10-17 01:14 PM

Lauren, I am always in awe of your wonderful
poetry. Always stunningly beautiful.

MmmmmmmmmWahhhhhhhh

Ethel

(LOL I couldn't remember how you do it!! LOL)

HopeS
Member Elite

since 2000-12-22

Posts 4596
Perth Western Australia

7 posted 2003-10-17 01:17 PM

Those enchanting dreamy images
most beautifully expressed
Hope

Mistletoe Angel

Member Empyrean

since 2000-12-17

Posts 32816
Portland, Oregon

8 posted 2003-10-17 01:38 PM

(smiles) Oh Lauren, this is beautiful, sweet friend, you always make rainbows dance across these pages and melt into a deep soup of magic, yay! (kiss on cheek) God Bless You, sweet friend, this is a treasure chest of beauty, I love it, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Lauren, thank you for sharing!

May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

I don't need no proof when it comes to God and truth
I can see the sun set and I perceive

***Live***

jellybeans
Member Elite

since 2000-10-13

Posts 2298

9 posted 2003-10-17 01:47 PM

well...let me see if I can say this...my colors melted, what seems ages ago, I have no more longings in the night...this...you...made me remember 'before', when I had a reason to try, a reason to cry....wonderful work

ctowen
Member Elite

since 2001-10-18

Posts 2286
Green Mountains of VT

10 posted 2003-10-17 08:16 PM

melting here

Magnus

Member Laureate

since 2001-10-10

Posts 14135
South Carolina, USA

11 posted 2003-10-17 08:18 PM

Lauren, soft and so delicate are your words.

Very nicely written.

Seymour Tabin
Member Empyrean

since 1999-07-07

Posts 31720
Tamarac Fla

12 posted 2003-10-17 10:28 PM

Lauren,
A soft and delicate read and write.

Aenimal
Member Rara Avis

since 2002-11-18

Posts 7350
the ass-end of space

13 posted 2003-10-18 01:24 AM

breathtaking as all your words are..thank you

passing shadows
Member Empyrean

since 1999-08-26

Posts 45577
displaced

14 posted 2003-10-18 04:06 AM

you have always been beautiful

KoKo
Senior Member

since 2003-02-15

Posts 995
Inside the shadow's shadow

15 posted 2003-10-18 04:48 AM

That was beautiful!

Susan Caldwell
Member Rara Avis

since 2002-12-27

Posts 8348
Florida

16 posted 2003-10-18 06:05 AM

Lauren~

This was so beautiful!

Susan

Ratleader

Member Rara Avis

since 2003-01-23

Posts 7026
Visiting Earth on a Guest Pass

17 posted 2003-10-18 10:39 AM

....mmmmmmm.....some quality time with Greeneyes this morning.....nice way to start the day.

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