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icebox
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in the shadows

0 posted 2003-10-17 11:24 AM



souls as threads merging
weaving knowledge time and space
binding sentient life

©2003 by icebox

© Copyright 2003 icebox - All Rights Reserved
angelblueyes
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1 posted 2003-10-17 11:27 AM


Wow oh wow oh wow.This spoke so much to me and it's going into my library.
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2 posted 2003-10-17 11:33 AM


Yes, threads there are...and other things...bound and unbound, connected and disparate, like neurons in the cortex of existence.

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3 posted 2003-10-17 11:34 AM


ah.. now Ice.. I've seen those threads..and you describe here as well as anyone without trying to actually paint the visual.. which has eluded me now for years. I do however know the threads are there..and sometimes can even touch them.

thanks for this bud.. for reasons I can't explain and wouldn't make sense anyway.

Martie
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4 posted 2003-10-17 11:44 AM


icebox

Much meaning in these few words...


nakdthoughts
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5 posted 2003-10-17 11:57 AM


the title took me somewhere else...but your words...as always, touch the sensitive in me.

M

James_A_Fraser
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6 posted 2003-10-31 01:35 PM


This little poem says so much more than it states, that I feel almost inadequate to reply. I did hesitate for a long time, and for that reason.



~~J

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7 posted 2003-10-31 01:44 PM


reminds me of a night in New Mexico..and seeing the threads of life..and how they all connected to all..and how one did touch souls when they reached out and touched a line...

enjoyed sir.. and thanks for the memory

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