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Martie
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0 posted 2003-10-17 10:36 AM



A small box opens
giving dimension to thought
and in fly these birds

© Copyright 2003 Martie Odell Ingebretsen - All Rights Reserved
angelblueyes
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1 posted 2003-10-17 10:40 AM


Martie, Your insight and writing always bring me a smile.This was great.I'm glad I chose you first to read this morning.
Crystal

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2 posted 2003-10-17 10:41 AM


Smiling at you....


may the birds that fly always be ones of peace....

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3 posted 2003-10-17 10:44 AM



by seeking treasure
fingers find poetry's dance
in wide-eyed delight


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Canada eh.
4 posted 2003-10-17 10:52 AM


Perfectly lovely Martie!
~Smiles & Hugs, Nancy~

~Autumn, the year's last, loveliest smile~

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5 posted 2003-10-17 10:52 AM


Martie
You always manage a delightful twist.

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6 posted 2003-10-17 10:54 AM


This left me smiling. *S*
Sunshine
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7 posted 2003-10-17 11:04 AM



Chuckling...
"in fly these birds"...

that's because you spoil them
[and us].


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8 posted 2003-10-17 11:05 AM


You do know how to haunt -- that image just reverberates!

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9 posted 2003-10-17 11:41 AM


~smiling~ also

M

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10 posted 2003-10-17 12:55 PM


This happens to you too?

smile...

just wish mine weren't CROWS.


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11 posted 2003-10-17 01:45 PM




(smiles) Awwwwwwww, I love birds with all my heart and believe they are all born to fly, yay! (kiss on cheek) God Bless You, sweet friend, this is filled with heart and soul, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Martie, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

I don't need no proof when it comes to God and truth
I can see the sun set and I perceive

***Live***

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12 posted 2003-10-19 02:03 PM


Martie - thanks for sharingyour birds with us - I can see all of them as I read your poem - Paul
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13 posted 2003-10-19 02:52 PM


Ah Martie, I love the way you make me see life.

Melissa~

Intellectually I know that Canada is no better than any other country. Emotionally I KNOW that Canada is the best country in the world!

garysgirl
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14 posted 2003-10-19 02:58 PM


Martie, your thoughts and
your birds are so pretty.
Hugs  
Ethel

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15 posted 2003-10-20 12:06 PM


. . . sounds like my mind . . .
*smile*
xxoo

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