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gemjop
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since 2002-11-18
Posts 2587
Pencilveinia, USA

0 posted 2003-10-17 09:48 AM


Saddening sentences
always touch from the fizz of electricity screen

Mother weep
for son is dead
years gone
she thinks of him

Every

Day

Though you are not gone
from flesh and bone
to sleepless sky
as far as I know

I mourn you
as if dead
I mother
you child

There is no fairness
in this

You
are not missing me
from heavens
nor sweeping the breeze upon my shoulders

just to let me know
you love me

You
are breathing steady
at home in human form

with stone policy
towards me
who loved you soft
as far as I know



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nakdthoughts
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since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200
Between the Lines
1 posted 2003-10-17 09:54 AM


I was  going to say I loved one particular part but your ending changed that...

I love how you "feel" with your words.

M

angelblueyes
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since 2003-07-19
Posts 2148
Oklahoma
2 posted 2003-10-17 11:38 AM


Your feeling and heart bring such vivid reality to the reader.I'm always touched by what you write.
Crystal

ctowen
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since 2001-10-18
Posts 2286
Green Mountains of VT
3 posted 2003-10-17 08:23 PM


As far as I know, you love no other way ...

       ... it has to be an everyday thing.


      *S      - ALWAYS!

Wind
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since 2002-10-12
Posts 2981

4 posted 2003-10-17 08:59 PM


augh gem...you have no idea what you do to me....

What about China? Have you seen the Great Wall?
All walls are great, if the roof doesn't fall.
-yorke/bjork

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