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HopeS
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0 posted 2003-10-17 07:44 AM



The Songs Never Fade

Visualised the scenes
We lovingly acquired
Both soaring toward
The passion required

With his musical style
Me dancing the beat
Minds alike travelled
Yet could never meet

His music to my ears
Love playing tenderly
My lips spilling words
Whispering intimately

Brown eyes met blue
Romantics conveyed
In written love affairs
The songs never fade

HopeĀ©2003

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Earth Angel
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1 posted 2003-10-17 07:49 AM


~ and may your "Songs Never Fade".

Lovely, dear Hope,

EA

Seymour Tabin
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2 posted 2003-10-17 07:52 AM


HopeS
How could anyone resist this.

ethome
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3 posted 2003-10-17 07:54 AM


May they never fade for the sake of all with romance in thier heart.
Good work!

Eric

Ain't doin nothin at all
Just answerin the call
Kinda driftin away from it all~~~~~

peachesNcream
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Ocean Of Tears
4 posted 2003-10-17 08:04 AM


This was absolutely beautiful! Everything flowed perfectly, great work! ~Jess

"Some of us think holding on makes us strong; but sometimes it is letting go." -Herman Hesse

HopeS
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5 posted 2003-10-17 08:51 AM


thank you EA , many happy hour is still spent , playing his songs he lovingly sent

Hope

HopeS
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6 posted 2003-10-17 08:54 AM


thank you Seymour , your replies are always so sweet

Hope

HopeS
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7 posted 2003-10-17 08:58 AM


Thank you Eric
Yes I have to agree
may romantic hearts
sing forever in harmony

Hope

HopeS
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8 posted 2003-10-17 09:02 AM


Thank you Jess , your caring kind reply is appreciated

Hope

Cerenity'sLine
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9 posted 2003-10-17 09:09 AM


Hi HopeS,

Beautifully done, very much enjoyed,

Cerenity

HopeS
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10 posted 2003-10-17 09:29 AM


Thank you so much Cerenity , I am
pleased you enjoyed

Hope

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