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Ellipses ... for Not a Poet
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Ellipses ... for Not a Poet |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart 
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Ellipses… Eternity’s thoughts drifting, feelings on lips left unsaid… |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
 Karilea, both you and your grandaughter ~ and the poetic thoughts ~ are beyond beautiful...  Loving hugs and Universal blessings to you and your precious bundle of joy... Linda Earth Angel |
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inkedgoddess Member Rara Avis
since 2002-11-19
Posts 7392Ohio |
some words just don't come, beautiful moment captured here, and yes, bring back your tree poem!! |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
Ooops! So early in the morning, I forgot to "Add Thread To Library". ~ Click! Mission accomplished! Have a glorious day, Dear Solar Orb! Linda |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Beautiful words...beautiful Picture! ~Hugs~ ~Autumn, the year's last, loveliest smile~ |
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Cpat Hair
since 2001-06-05
Posts 11793 |
lol Pete should appreciate..lol.. but in OPEN???? are you sure he even ventures over here?? and where is your meter and rhyme?? you know he likes both... oh oh..... I overused elipses again... dang it! |
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Local Parasite
since 2001-11-05
Posts 2527Transylconia, Winnipeg |
I think that you might consider doing away with the ellipsis. I hate ellipsis.  |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
I love this picture Karilea... hugss (and who cares about ellipses)  M |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
HATE ELLIPSEs???!!!!???!!!! Get rid of the ellips????? *moth shudders* whats next? deny me alliterations too??? Bri-babes ... WE need to talk ... Sunshine... BEAUTIFUL!!!  every time I talk to you its over too soon every day feels incomplete till you walk into the room just say the words, I'll jump that moon. D.Gray [This message has been edited by Janet Marie (10-17-2003 09:30 AM).] |
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Cpat Hair
since 2001-06-05
Posts 11793 |
LOL.. Bri is just in a mood of late,I think. He must be suffering from an attack of structureitus compounded by properitus. the two combined have left him rather critical of late. LMAO  |
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suthern
since 1999-07-29
Posts 20723Louisiana |
I'm not Pete... but there are often times I'm not a poet... so I'm claiming this beauty! *G* |
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Not A Poet Member Elite
since 1999-11-03
Posts 3885Oklahoma, USA |
Thanks Karilea...That has to be the most colorful and poetic description I have ever heard of the lowly elipsis...Also probably the first time anyone ever dedicated a poem...or anything else to me...  ...Ron, I can't come to Open often because it moves so dang fast it makes me diiiizzzzzyy..kinda like motion sickness  Pete BTW, I think this would go over well in CA too  |
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angelblueyes Member Elite
since 2003-07-19
Posts 2148Oklahoma |
This was good and I knew eh'd enjoy it.You always have a way with words.  Crystal |
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Martie
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
Karilea.....I love ellipses...they are sort of second nature to my fingers. Wonderful poem! And great new photo!  |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
I used to be addicted to ellipses...and old habits die hard. (It took a stubborn little New Zealander from C/A for me to tone that down too--thanks Kamla! )Congratulations Kari, on the lovely addition to the family, AND on dragging the anonymous Pete out on stage for a bow! (The baby is just slightly cuter than Pete!) |
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Patricia Member Elite
since 2003-04-06
Posts 2160Missouri |
Drifting away in my thoughts against the grain of mundane...yes, I need this. This is succint perfection, Karilea. Patricia |
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Mistletoe Angel
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
 (smiles) Somewhere we need movement...and everywhere else we need elipses...simple as that! (big hugggsssssss) Ellipses truly bring the whole drama into effect and do we love that drama, yay, God Bless You and your grandchild, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Karilea, thank you for sharing! May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton I don't need no proof when it comes to God and truth |
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Not A Poet Member Elite
since 1999-11-03
Posts 3885Oklahoma, USA |
Awwww Karen. Dang! |
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Nan
Administrator
Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-20
Posts 21191Cape Cod Massachusetts USA |
Hyperbolic ellipses are an accepted anomaly here at PiP.... Yep they are...  ... |
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Magnus
since 2001-10-10
Posts 14135South Carolina, USA |
KJ, speechless here.... beautiful picture of a obviously very proud grandmother....and one sleeping little angel. |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
YEAH!!! WHAT NAN SAID!!!!!!! (and look at all the allits she used to say it) WOOO HOOOO. Now Bri? Are you gonna argue with the teach??? I mean... Now Bri ... Are you really ... gonna argue ... with the teach???  How can ya not love those little elips... think of them as poetic stars...or snowflakes...I KNOW how much ya love snow. every time I talk to you its over too soon |
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
LOL...thank you all... JM...snowflakes of thought... who would've thunk? I'm sure Bri is screeching, but I am also sure he will find his dedicated poem, and sigh, and say, "what do you expect from a mother???" And then he'll give a hug. He's so GOOD! [This message has been edited by Sunshine (10-17-2003 10:08 PM).] |
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