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nakdthoughts
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0 posted 2003-10-17 05:26 AM





Our tears touched,
shared the moment
carrying it home with me
wondering when the exhaustion
will set in enough that
I collapse in want of it.
My only companion...
weariness.

"Love is not blind - It sees more and not less, but because it sees more, it is willing to see less."
(Will Moss)

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passing shadows
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1 posted 2003-10-17 05:33 AM


I know
ethome
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2 posted 2003-10-17 06:30 AM


That's putting it simply but so relatable to all.
Nice choice of words to depict weariness!

Eric

The best teachers have the biggest ears

inkedgoddess
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3 posted 2003-10-17 06:52 AM


very succinct and well composed in a few sentences; god i have trouble with this.....nice job
Earth Angel
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4 posted 2003-10-17 07:33 AM


M, I have known that feeling and you captured it perfectly!


EA

Seymour Tabin
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5 posted 2003-10-17 08:05 AM


Maureen,
Well done, good write.

nakdthoughts
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6 posted 2003-10-17 09:37 AM


Dixie, mind and spirit and bodily tired... waiting for something to give

Thanks E...lack of energy to come up with more words

M...hey  and I have small ears   


Michele, how's the world treating you up there in Play-off land
thanks and hugs

Linda, not a very good feeling...one I am trying to shake off today. *s

Thanks Sy



angelblueyes
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7 posted 2003-10-17 12:26 PM


:squueze:I know exactly what you mean.May the weariness subside and newfound strength remain.
Crystal

inkedgoddess
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8 posted 2003-10-17 10:25 PM


maureen,

yes there are 2 very happy campers in my home tonight,,,,,,,
the two bronxboys are grinning with pride in their yankees once again.....
me, im a closet met fan........if only they knew........lol

EvocativeVerse2
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9 posted 2003-10-18 01:33 AM


Your pain saddens me. ***HUG***

Remember, if you're not part of the future, you're history!

nakdthoughts
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10 posted 2003-10-18 08:39 AM


Crystal..thanks

Michele...gonna be a great series
*s
M

EV2, I appreciate the hugs. The pain comes and goes, but will last a while, I am sure.
Part of life.
Thank you
M

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