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the_loner_23
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since 2002-06-08
Posts 5479
Jacksonville, Florida, USA

0 posted 2003-10-15 11:41 PM


I thought this love was forever
But destiny stepped in
And said maybe not

How can a love like this
So pure and so true
Be so wrong

What went wrong
What changed
What happened
To this love we had

I thought this was forever
I thought one day
We would be married
And together for eternity

Now another girl is in the picture
Where do I fit in
What happened to the love we shared
I know what happened
It just fizzled out

Where did I go wrong
Why was my love not enough
I don't know
And now I don't care

Cold hands means a warm heart

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ThunderMage
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since 2002-06-20
Posts 812
Canada
1 posted 2003-10-15 11:44 PM


You should care. That's a requirement for love.

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Rosebud1229
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since 2000-04-05
Posts 1813
North Carolina
2 posted 2003-10-15 11:45 PM


I understand completely, at least you found out now instead of later.
Kaz
Junior Member
since 2003-10-12
Posts 26

3 posted 2003-10-15 11:48 PM


You might never know what went wrong. Sometimes people just drift apart.
Bec
Member
since 2001-02-23
Posts 475
Canberra
4 posted 2003-10-16 07:12 AM


This made me cry. I don't mean that in a bad way, I could just see myself. And to be honest, even though it upsets me sometimes, I really am grateful every day that things are the way they are now. Today's reminder was a bit harsh, but this made me feel better. Thanks.

B

"I'm not crazy I'm just a little unwell"~ Matchbox 20

angelblueyes
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since 2003-07-19
Posts 2148
Oklahoma
5 posted 2003-10-17 12:44 PM


You do care and that'w what make you a wonderful spirit.It's his loss and leaves you open for someone who truly deserves what you've to give.
Crystal

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since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816
Portland, Oregon
6 posted 2003-10-17 04:15 PM




(big hugggsssssss) Ah, but you do care, and that is how love is truly going to find you again, whenever that may be! (sigh) God Bless You, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Julie, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

I don't need no proof when it comes to God and truth
I can see the sun set and I perceive

***Live***

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