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exhale
Senior Member
since 2003-06-13
Posts 646
Alberta,Canada

0 posted 2003-10-15 11:36 PM


i'm upset
i've been that way a lot lately
a lot
its not fair
lifes not fair is it?
why dont you ever see me
you never look
i'm more than meets the eye
i'm more
i'm more...
dont forget to breathe
its important
maybe one day i'll just stop
theres no point to breathing
if lifes a circle
wake up
breathe
sleep
i'm more
i'm more
i want to be more
but i'm not
i know it
you know it
thats why you never see me.
a waste of space....

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Sunnyone
Member Ascendant
since 2000-07-06
Posts 5334
Staffordshire, England
1 posted 2003-10-16 02:10 AM


You're here, and alive, and sharing...not a waste of space at all, but a valued member of our little family here!!  I felt your pain in this, and appreciated how you wrote your feelings here. *hugs* ~S~

Accept these small gifts from my gypsy heart  ~S~

Bec
Member
since 2001-02-23
Posts 475
Canberra
2 posted 2003-10-16 07:01 AM


Hi exhale...

It's like you reached across the world and pulled these thoughts out of my head! Like Sunnyone, I too felt your pain. Pain is such a raw emotion, and I can almost always relate to those feelings. But you'll never be a waste of space! I know sometimes it's strange to be sharing such personal feelings with people you've never met, but you'll always be welcomed with open arms here!

B

"I'm not crazy I'm just a little unwell"~ Matchbox 20

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