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River
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since 2003-09-16
Posts 627
my own little world

0 posted 2003-10-15 10:51 PM



nobody understands
the comlexity of
fast food.

repitition
over and over again
Big Wacs and Moppers
nothing but hamburglers
and french flies
just flip floppers
all day long
over and over again.

do you want flies with that?
do ya, do ya - ha?
Large or Supersized or
Biggie or
Great Super Duper Biggie
it's all the same.

Lets all make people fatter
than they need to be
and our money bags and
dollar menus
will just grow and grow right along

maybe everyone should buy a salad
from now on
they taste good
thier good for you
thier fun to make
and you don't have to worry about
kats up and mus terd
and mayo and custer d
or piks and ons
or let us and tomay to
or the buns being upside down.
...or maybe i should just find a new job!

Love hurts as bad as it feels good.

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Greeneyes
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In Your Poetic Mind
1 posted 2003-10-15 10:57 PM


personally it's a choice..if one wants to go or not..I am not sure I understand whats so complex?..interesting write

Greeneyes~


Will the wind ever remember
the names it has blown in the past
with its crutch, its old age, and its
wisdom it whispers no this won't be the last


[This message has been edited by Greeneyes (10-15-2003 10:58 PM).]

River
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since 2003-09-16
Posts 627
my own little world
2 posted 2003-10-15 11:11 PM


lol, that was sarcasm...the whole poem is poking fun at my job...wich i work full time at...i only spent five minutes writing it. lol

Love hurts as bad as it feels good.

[This message has been edited by River (10-15-2003 11:15 PM).]

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