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exhale
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since 2003-06-13
Posts 646
Alberta,Canada

0 posted 2003-10-15 10:49 PM


sweep me off my feet
i've fallen
can you hear my heart beating for you
only you
are you even listening
do you care
even if you didn't it would still beat
just louder
louder
i'm sorry i can't be perect
but you can't stop my heart from beating for you
only you

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Midnitesun
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since 2001-05-18
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Gaia
1 posted 2003-10-16 12:21 PM


keep it beating for yourself,
and since no one is perfect,
you are totally normal

KoKo
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since 2003-02-15
Posts 995
Inside the shadow's shadow
2 posted 2003-10-17 10:55 AM


Wow, reminds me alot of how I used to write.
Keep 'em coming...it's nice to remember

angelblueyes
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since 2003-07-19
Posts 2148
Oklahoma
3 posted 2003-10-17 11:00 AM


The beat goes on and on and on.I liked this.
Crystal

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