Deamt Fakeness Reality Found

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Open Poetry #29

Deamt Fakeness Reality Found

RedStoneEB
Senior Member

since 2003-06-08

Posts 772
uk

0 posted 2003-10-15 07:15 PM

Awoken dreams, invaded thoughts
Lost loved ones, brought forth
Fantasy places, created in mind
Unwalked plains travelled inside.

Forests of memories explored
Leaves blown, each memory falls
Unlocked secrets, scattered on floor
Hidden truths given to the beholder
His existence depends on these answers.

Scattered colours formed to one
Now stood beauty, true lost love
Trapped in this world till dawn
Waiting sunlight to break through these walls.

Embraced togetherness, tender so warm
A kiss soon unfelt, Faded memory
Turned to the next as a tear leaked out
Fallen to knees, crazed in this dream

Wanting escape to real not fake
Haunted by the faces of past
Covered in fear from pain once had
Brought back by the memories

Sunlight dissolves the world dreamt
Colours fade to dust, finally escaped
Bedroom appears, wiped tears gone away
Ready to face another real day

JamesMichael
Member Empyrean

since 1999-11-16

Posts 33336
Kapolei, Hawaii, USA

1 posted 2003-10-15 08:41 PM

Nice writing...James

ShakespearesSister
Junior Member

since 2003-10-14

Posts 24

2 posted 2003-10-16 04:28 AM

Oh My!

great writing!

passing shadows
Member Empyrean

since 1999-08-26

Posts 45577
displaced

3 posted 2003-10-16 04:53 AM

awesome writing! perfect ending!

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