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inspiredpoetwriter
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0 posted 2003-10-12 12:21 PM


*Little Note*
A poem a ex g/f and I did about another *long story* but we dont regret anything we do/did but we're friend's now n that's all that matter's we just show off our love through our poetry...its abeautiful poem if I do say so my self.. the (C) is me and the (S) is Steph..

Title: ^Fires Of Heaven Within^

(C) Everytime I look in your eyes,
I see heaven a soft loving place.
A kind warm soul where I know I,
Fit I found someone who knows my
Heart.

(S) The pools of love and care,
So devine to me they are.
I look into your eyes,
And I can reach heaven.
Your presence is something,
So pure and sweet.
Something that I,
Feel I'm worthy of.

(C) A morning sunrise a blissful kiss,
Nightly dream's I have of this.
A love so true I have the memeories,
I have the faith of you & me never,
Will it fade I have fate in us.

(S) Rising each morning to,
The sunrise of this.
Having the faith,
To grasp onto us.

(S) Kisses of moonlight,
And tears of sun.
We share togethor,
What no one does.

(C) I reach for your hand,brining it
To my lips softly kissing your
Finger tips I pray to heaven,
To the lord that my heart my soul
Is laced with your's till the rising dusk.

(C) Raining days turn to days in bed
Nobody will ever be like us have the feelings
The faith, the trust, the love, the laughter
Some how someday I'll hold you while your
Darkest hour kiss away your tear's of pain and sorrow.

(S) Everybody's rainy days,
Will be sweet memories,
For us to hold close,
Until the ever rising morning.

(S) The fog that will settle,
Will hide us from them.
As we kiss and tell,
our many fantasies

(C) Season's change never do we,
How we love well? that's our secret.
Northern light's dance across the sky,
An imgae of two start to appear something,
Nobody ever thought could have lasted,
A tangled sheet,a passionet moan,a soft
Whisper to you my love.

(S) Fall turns to Winter,
The ice settles in.
The fires we build,
could melt them away.

(S) The snow is lit up,
With two dancing shadows.
Everyone guesses,
But no body knows.

(S) We dance in the snow,
Tangling togethor.
Making a light show,
Nothing is better.

(C) A paper heart a paper flower
I'll give you both nothing else makes me
Stronger then you nobody else makes,
Fall deeper in love than you do
A million reason's wont explain the way,
Or feeling's I have for you.

(C) Only my self can show you that only
My finger's can give you chills like the,
Morning wind make you weak as
I cuddle you close.

(S) So we can lay among,
The tall soft flowers,
And watch all of the clouds,
Pass in a lullaby of love.

(S) Holding you so close,
The gently breeze,
Of my touch as it brushes,
Over your skin.

(S) In the summer time,
My touch will feel like,
It's winter time,
In the middle of June.

(C) Shoting star's fly in the sky,
Spelling out the words of love.
A water fall runs just like the,
Pooring of our drops of love.
A medow of mist will hide our shadow's
Leaving nothing only the two of us.

(C) Time slips by ever so slow
A none stop beating,
Drums the beat of just one heart
Deepest water will shower blend,
Us together.

(S) So beautifully fashioned,
So delicately curved,
Our love is sculpted,
With an everlasting purpose.

(S) Togethor we will tangle,
As one and only one.
Our love holding us up,
As an entangled soul.

(S) Smooth like the sky,
Ridged like the stars,
Nothing can stop us now,
We're togethor forever.

(C) You keep me drowning,
Deeper in to the ocean of your,
Arms you have me smiling,
From your angelic angel face,
I wont deny how beautiful you are.

(C) Autumn's here with only two,
Leaf's left on the oak tree last to fall,
Always 1st to find their place up high
No danger is near,
A dream they live in yet it's real.

(S) The wind will still flow,
With everlasting hope.
Our love will fly high,
For an eternity.

(S) We will blend,
Just like the water.
Ripples of our love,
Spreading forever.

(C) Morning light will shine,
Through the window of our hearts.
The sound of the music keeps playing,
As we go with strong heart's with spirit,
We stand together proud and full of life.

(C) I'll take three simple words,
Words that say alot that mean the truth.
I'll say those wrods as I write them,
I love you no moutain will is ever to high.

© Care & Steph "03"

© Copyright 2003 Care - All Rights Reserved
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1 posted 2003-10-15 06:50 PM


Welcome to Passions, Steph!  
You two did a wonderful duet!

Karilea - if I whisper, will you listen?

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2 posted 2003-10-15 06:57 PM


welcome to passions enjoyed this write
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3 posted 2003-10-15 08:15 PM


Silky...James
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4 posted 2003-10-19 03:43 PM




(smiles) Awwwwwwwwww, this is a beautiful duet, sweet friend, I'm so happy you liked my title idea and I wish for firesn of joy to always fill both your hearts and God Bless You Both! (big hugggsssssss) God Bless You Both, sweet friends, we all love you so much! You have such beautiful hearts, sweet friends, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

I don't need no proof when it comes to God and truth
I can see the sun set and I perceive

***Live***

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5 posted 2003-10-19 03:52 PM


Welcome to Passion's.You both wrote something very smooth.
Crystal

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