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sassydee2003
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since 2003-10-15
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0 posted 2003-10-15 03:39 PM


i'm so deeply hurt by you
i have so many different emotions inside trying to rip out of my chest
anger
fustration
hurt
pain
love
happiness
envy
disgust
regret confusion

all because of you..
you did this to me....

i'm so over whelmed by these feelings
i feel..
love
happiness
joy
delight
because i had you
because you were there by me to show and give me
love
happiness
joy
delight
i was their for you to show and give you
love
happiness
joy
delight
we were able to share
love
happiness
joy
delight together

now i feel
anger
fustration
confusion
hurt
pain
envy
disgust
regret
dissapointment and
hatred
because of you...
now i'm here alone with these overwhelming feelings inside that are trying to rip through my chest
these feelings of
anger
fustration
confusion
hurt
pain
envy
disgust
regret
dissapoinment and
hatred
because of you
because your no longer here
not here to take these feelings away
you abandoned me


i feel
anger,
fustrastion,
hurt and
pain
because you left
i feel...
envy because i no longer have you and someone else might
disgust because of how i'm feeling
dissappointment because thats what you did to me
hatred and regret because then i wouldn't have alls these overwhelming emotions inside
feelings of
anger, fustrastion,hurt,pain,love,happiness,envy,disgust, dissapointment,regret,hatred,joy,confusion ,and delight
all inside of me right now that are making me cry because of the pain of them trying to rip through my chest
i hate you!
yet i still love you.....

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Sunnyone
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since 2000-07-06
Posts 5334
Staffordshire, England
1 posted 2003-10-15 03:59 PM


Oh, I do understand this one, as most of us will...it's full of the confusion, and very emotions that knock us off balance when things don't work out. A powerful first post, my friend, and I can only add that we're glad you're here!  ~S~

Accept these small gifts from my gypsy heart  ~S~

JamesMichael
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since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336
Kapolei, Hawaii, USA
2 posted 2003-10-15 08:23 PM


On any given day it is not guaranteed what feelings we will experience...James
garysgirl
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3 posted 2003-10-15 09:53 PM


Welcome to Passions In poetry.
this was an interesting first
post. I hope that you like it here.
Please check your e-mail for a special
greeting from all of us here at PIP.
Ethel/garysgirl
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Sunshine
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Listening to every heart
4 posted 2003-10-18 03:42 PM



I don't think
you missed a word.

Welcome to Passions!

Karilea - if I whisper, will you listen?

Mistletoe Angel
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Portland, Oregon
5 posted 2003-10-19 03:39 PM




(big hugggsssssssss) This is a most heartaching debut that seems to have gotten all the words necessary, sweet friend, I send angel hugs your way in hope as soon as possible you find all your heart desires to ease the heart, God Bless You! Welcome to Passions, sweet friend, may you be inspired by all of us here as we will all be inspired by your lovely words! I can't wait to read more of your fabulous poetry, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

I don't need no proof when it comes to God and truth
I can see the sun set and I perceive

***Live***

angelblueyes
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since 2003-07-19
Posts 2148
Oklahoma
6 posted 2003-10-19 03:58 PM


Welcome to Passion's.This is full of such sadness and emotion.You show it well and I'm glad you could let it out.May your days soon be filled with happiness and joy.
Crystal

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