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machiner
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since 2003-03-13
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0 posted 2003-10-15 10:11 AM


In July of this past summer, apparently my 5 year old daughter had impressed me no end.

While cleaning out my \documents folder, I found this little ode.  

I think I wrote it to remind me of the days, when I'm old and my sweetie is "big", and I have other considerations to make.

big sister


there is no goodnight
without her reassuring embrace
and a wipe-away kiss

there is no morning or new day
without her life-affirming hugs
and her sweet "good morning"

she is a hero
finding herself big without the bigness
confused and proud, strong and shy
she is a big sister

she looses her prize toys
gladly --
and teaches him songs

she pours his milk
spilling a little, wiping it up,
-- I smile from my perch --

she tends to his safety away from home
ans assures his compliance
to the rules

she warns him of the bad-bugs
and the gross foods
and the yummy ones, too

she hugs his boo-boo's into submission
and dances with him for the joy...
spinning away the dullness or rainy days.

she lets him know "Daddy's busy"
and waits with him, until she interrupts
with her 5-year-old diplomacy
reminding Daddy of what's really important.


machiner
the hero's lucky Dad
7/23/03
11:30 am EST

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Seymour Tabin
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since 1999-07-07
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Tamarac Fla
1 posted 2003-10-15 10:14 AM


machiner
A delight to read, enjoyed.

Nan
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since 1999-05-20
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Cape Cod Massachusetts USA
2 posted 2003-10-15 09:14 PM


We DO need to get our priorities straight, don't we?... This is wonderful, machiner..
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