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Gentle Spirit
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0 posted 2003-10-15 07:59 AM




Autumn Haiku

Ballet of colors
Dancing in autumn breezes
Bowing to the wind.


        

Arch of golden hues
Softly swaying to and fro
Autumnal beauty.



It's better than I could have planned..
it's made me who I am...
{Trace Adkins}

[This message has been edited by Gentle Spirit (10-15-2003 09:01 AM).]

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Cpat Hair
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1 posted 2003-10-15 08:39 AM


beauty indeed... and it always seems to contain the elements of something magical...in transformation and in appearance.

well done... indeed!

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2 posted 2003-10-15 08:42 AM


this is so inspiring, and so peaceful....your words have graced us with the absolute beauty of Autumn....hugsssss sister....
ME~

Will the wind ever remember
the names it has blown in the past
with its crutch, its old age, and its
wisdom it whispers no this won't be the last

Sunshine
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3 posted 2003-10-15 08:50 AM


Now whose muse is being generous...smiling with you.  
Let's walk.

scorpio
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4 posted 2003-10-15 08:56 AM


Two beautiful haikus!!!  Well done indeed!!

believe in what your heart feels...

Sunshine
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5 posted 2003-10-15 09:10 AM


you made me think...

In swift descent, Fall
Rivers of color, Autumn
Riotous passings
Enchantress
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Canada eh.
6 posted 2003-10-15 09:13 AM


Beautiful Donna!
Aren't the colors spectacular this time of year?!
These are so lovely.
~Smiles & warm hugs, Nancy~

~Autumn, the year's last, loveliest smile~

Susan Caldwell
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7 posted 2003-10-15 09:14 AM


Ahhhhhhhhh...I hate Florida!! It's a colorless state...

This was beautiful!!

Susan

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8 posted 2003-10-15 09:35 AM


Hi Gentle Spirit,

Wonderfully done and so inviting,

Cerenity

vandana
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9 posted 2003-10-15 10:01 AM


nice read
Seymour Tabin
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10 posted 2003-10-15 10:06 AM


Gentle Spirit
A lovely for each. Enjoyed

nakdthoughts
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11 posted 2003-10-17 09:48 AM


It's so beautiful  this time of year. I remember the ride to visit you once and how I stopped along the way to take pictures.

hugss
M

angelblueyes
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12 posted 2003-10-17 11:45 AM


The beauty is easy to see through your heart and eyes.
Crystal

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13 posted 2003-10-17 04:18 PM






(smiles) Oh Donna, this is beautiful, sweet friend, you make all the colors glow and glisten with your words, yay! (kiss on cheek) God Bless You, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Donna, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

I don't need no proof when it comes to God and truth
I can see the sun set and I perceive

***Live***

SimplyGold
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14 posted 2003-10-17 06:06 PM


Gentle Spirit,

Soothing, beautiful need I say more?

Enjoyed,
SG

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15 posted 2003-10-17 06:59 PM


Very beautifully done Donna.  So appropriate.
Gentle Spirit
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16 posted 2003-10-20 02:23 PM


sincere thank yous to all...I appreciate you and wish I had more time here...
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