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A Little Bit of Puck

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Seymour Tabin
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A Little bit of Puck

Within the joy of wondrous
I fly the ploy mischievous
With puckish wings of desire
I search the byways of admire.

But if you ask, I would deny
My mind and I would not comply
We play a part of duel roll
A separation of control

One a flight within the dark
Across a bridge that is an arc
Into a land of make believe
Of only thought and wish conceive

Withdrawal to a place of leisure
Accented with a stay of pleasure
A salve to sooth the care of wear
A valve to close upon despair

It is a place we all know well
We visit it in nightly dwell.

© Copyright 2003 Seymour Tabin - All Rights Reserved
ethome
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1 posted 10-15-2003 07:50 AM       View Profile for ethome   Email ethome   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit ethome's Home Page   View IP for ethome

Being a Canuck I opened this immediately thinking "well, isn't great Sy has written a hockey poem", I immediately realized that it was much better than any silly hockey poem and I was being silly trying to be funny about it.


Good work!

Eric

The best teachers have the biggest ears

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good write Sey, much enjoyed.
Nan
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Then we wake up to your Little Bit of Bloomin' Puck... to grace our morning...
Seymour Tabin
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ethome,
Enjoyed your comment. LOL

Gentle Spirit,
Thanks for the read and reply.
Seymour Tabin
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5 posted 10-15-2003 08:37 AM       View Profile for Seymour Tabin   Email Seymour Tabin   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Seymour Tabin

Nan,
Good morning sweetness.
Sunshine
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Puck sits your shoulder
with a grin and a lark
today...thank you Sy
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An insightful look at the world of dreams my friend..as always, Sy, you give us things to ponder..

believe in what your heart feels...

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"One a flight within the dark
Across a bridge that is an arc
Into a land of make believe
Of only thought and wish conceive"

Beautiful words left for us to read this morn Sy.
But remember, 'A dream is a wish your heart makes.'
Tea's on...I'll pour, you sip and write another dream.

~Morning hugs & tea, Nancy~

~Autumn, the year's last, loveliest smile~

Susan Caldwell
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When I saw the title...I though of Puck from "Real World, San Fransisco" Yikes!!!  

But alas it is a poem about one of my favorite subjects...Thank you Sy for reminding me that I need more sleep...



Withdrawal to a place of leisure
Accented with a stay of pleasure
A salve to sooth the care of wear
A valve to close upon despair

It is a place we all know well
We visit it in nightly dwell.

I love those lines and I am saving this and no one can stop me!!!!

Susan

"if you won't let me fall for you
then you won't see the best that I would love to do for you"
~Dido~

Seymour Tabin
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10 posted 10-15-2003 09:56 AM       View Profile for Seymour Tabin   Email Seymour Tabin   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Seymour Tabin

Sunshine
Randy is having fun again.

scorpio
Love your comments.

Nancy,
You pour I'll sip.

Susan,
Your replies are always a pleasure to read.
Janet Marie
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A salve to sooth the care of wear
A valve to close upon despair

=========================


your clever word play and poetic banter always make me smile.
Randy is dandy when hes playful as Puck.
*ww*

every time I talk to you its over too soon
every day feels incomplete till you walk into the room
just say the words, I'll jump that moon.

D.Gray

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And your puck and pluck makes you all the more intriguing!


EA
Seymour Tabin
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JM,
A dandy from Randy glad you enjoyed.
WWRS

Earth Angel
If weren't already an Angel I'd call you one.
serenity blaze
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and now I crave coffee, to go with the sweet.

nice choice, suze.

seymour lives
 
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