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A Romantic Heart
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since 1999-09-03
Posts 5496
Forever In Your Heart

0 posted 2003-10-15 05:43 AM


HE HEARS MY HEARTBEAT
(for GR)

He hears my heartbeat,
upon every word,

His words flow as a river,
deep into my soul,

His fingers, his body quivers,
His emotions , they flow,

For it is love he seeks,
One of the romantic kind,

Dreamy waters and mountain peeks,
Flowing rays of beautiful sunshine,

His soul embraces my heart,
It sings with every beat,

To the rhythm of his poetry,
I am connected and complete,

This love I hear,
So sweet to my ear,

Of longing and desire,
Warm aglow I feel
Through loves fire,

He is an artist of words,
They paint a picture across my heart,

One calling out to me,
As a light throughout the dark,

His heart whispers gently this love song,
To the melody of my heart beat,

Both flowing in perfect harmony,
As the river to the sea,

I am elated and moved as I read his words,
and he hears my heartbeat across the miles between us,

And love keeps playing our tune,
To the heatbeat of love in full bloom.

As I now depart,
He keeps hearing the heartbeat of my heart...


[This message has been edited by A Romantic Heart (10-15-2003 05:45 AM).]

© Copyright 2003 Millette A. (Lester) Addison - All Rights Reserved
Goldenrose
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since 2003-05-30
Posts 3665

1 posted 2003-10-15 07:18 AM


I hear and feel your heartbeat my love....and it never fails to touch me...fill me with pride and passion...thank you for this brilliant poem to me....love...

Goldenrose.xxxxxxxx

''Each soul is potentialy divine..the goal is to manifest that divinity''

A Romantic Heart
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since 1999-09-03
Posts 5496
Forever In Your Heart
2 posted 2003-10-15 07:25 AM


Beating on the page, my vermilion heart is displayed for your eyes to see, the love deep inside of me...

Thank you my love for words so valuable to my heart...without you, my heart cannot beat, cannot write, all poems are inspired by you!

xxxxxxx love ~ARH

True poets don't write with the ink of quill or pen, but with the ink of their heart~

ethome
Member Patricius
since 2000-05-14
Posts 11858
New Brunswick Canada
3 posted 2003-10-15 07:54 AM


Hey you two, I love to hear such tender thoughts about each other.
The poem is very very nice, well done!

Eric

The best teachers have the biggest ears

Gentle Spirit
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since 2000-10-09
Posts 13989

4 posted 2003-10-15 08:03 AM


very tender write and beautiful love you share for all to enjoy...Hugs.
JamesMichael
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since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336
Kapolei, Hawaii, USA
5 posted 2003-10-15 07:55 PM


Nice to share romantic interplay...James
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