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GG
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Lost in thought

0 posted 2003-10-15 01:30 AM



I’m just missing you so much
I think you’d miss me too…
I miss the comfort of your touch
And everything you’d do.

But the house is just so quiet now
The stars are shining,
Moon is blinding
And my eyes are so resistant
To the changes in my heart.

So I turned the music on tonight
And then my tv too,
Next that heater and the fan…
Just something,
That would whisper you.

I just want
To feel your hand upon my shoulder
Not phantom, ghost, or angel grins
Then I could smile being sober…
Till missing you began again.



- And so it was that time stood still -
     (blink, breathe, stand, fight)



[This message has been edited by GG (10-15-2003 04:37 PM).]

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A Romantic Heart
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Forever In Your Heart
1 posted 2003-10-15 05:14 AM


This was lonely and sad feelings here,
enjoyed!

~ARH

True poets don't write with the ink of quill or pen, but with the ink of their heart~

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