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eminor_angel
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0 posted 2003-10-14 10:27 PM


Breathe The Moon

Orb Goddess
Your fingertips caress my mind
Take away my full moon madness
Serpentine
Can I be truly deranged
If I am aware
That there are scorpions in the sky
That the stars are always fading
That the moon commands the tides
And the pulsing of my veins
In out
Low tide high
Exhale inhale
Breathe the moon



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littlewing
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1 posted 2003-10-14 10:31 PM


deranged to breathe the moon?
hardly angel . . .

most days she breathes to me
*smile*
xxoo

JamesMichael
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2 posted 2003-10-15 12:18 PM


Nice...James
Marge Tindal
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3 posted 2003-10-15 10:56 AM


EminorAngel~
This is such a lovely write.
Made for a very pleasurable morning read~
Thank you~
*Huglets*
~*Marge*~

~*When the heart grieves over what it has lost,
the spirit rejoices over what it has left.
- Sufi epigram
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