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junemac
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0 posted 2003-10-14 03:59 PM


Cradle of bricks


The walls are breathing
Whispering even
We can bury you
We can murder your spirit
Stay in this tomb
We can steal you from your skin
The outer world is too much
Too scary, Too free
Anything could happen
Out there
Stay
We will love you
Comfort you
Hide
There is nothing left
But you
Here
Safe
Forever


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1 posted 2003-10-14 04:07 PM


such a cradle might be safe..and such a cradle as we as mankind are comfortable in..with the illusions of love and civilization.. but it lacks the freedom of bend... and does close us in...


enjoyed...

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2 posted 2003-10-14 04:41 PM




(big hugggsssssss) We all need some kind of cradle, some refuge, though bricks just may eventually scar us even more! (sad sigh) May we all find refuge and wear a cradle of velvet or lace, sweet friend, God Bless You, this is powerful, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet June, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

I don't need no proof when it comes to God and truth
I can see the sun set and I perceive

***Live***

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