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a field visit |
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Sudhir Iyer Member Ascendant
since 2000-04-26
Posts 6943Mumbai, India : now in Belgium 
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furry rabbits rush in open hectares of a playground where a gentleman’s game was played at times when vertical heat (and red cricket balls) raced to hunt them down these days a chill looms - forlorn crisp the autumn air that surrounds chattering teeth crunchy the sounds of bites of diced potato-beings freshly ousted from their wraps to feed the insatiable belly devour gratify your desire and sink it quick with pints of dew for it doesn’t augur well to spend the small rations of light repenting a past summer [This message has been edited by Sudhir Iyer (10-14-2003 03:53 PM).] |
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Cpat Hair
since 2001-06-05
Posts 11793 |
gratify your desire and sink it quick with pints of dew for it doesn’t augur well to spend the small rations of light repenting a past summer sudhir... this I think says more than the words themselves... and has a meaning to you perhaps that we may never fully understand... and if I am wrong..then know it syas to me more that I care to sometimes myself..understand. |
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Sudhir Iyer Member Ascendant
since 2000-04-26
Posts 6943Mumbai, India : now in Belgium |
well, most of this is about visiting the cricket field where I just spent my summer each weekend playing what is named the gentleman's game of Cricket and the rest of it is about how short the autumn days are (and crisp winter days would be)... but then I will be biting those crispy chips and wanting the summer's warmth... almost like someone with painful memories longing for yesterday's fun and joy and ...  thanks for your response, and I understand you quite well... regards sudhir [This message has been edited by Sudhir Iyer (10-14-2003 04:47 PM).] |
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Mistletoe Angel 
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
 (sigh) Oh Sudhir, this is so beautifully nostalgic, sweet friend, this reminded me of when I used to play tennis with my cousin all the time and drink raspberry lemonade, and how I cherish these memories but still embrace each new summer! (big hugggsssssss) God Bless You, sweet friend, I love it, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Sudhir, thank you for sharing!  May love and light always shine upon you! Love. Noah Eaton I don't need no proof when it comes to God and truth |
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vandana
since 1999-10-22
Posts 10463USA |
nice read |
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suthern
since 1999-07-29
Posts 20723Louisiana |
I like this very much, Sudhir... especially the ending. *S* |
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Sudhir Iyer Member Ascendant
since 2000-04-26
Posts 6943Mumbai, India : now in Belgium |
Noah, you are way too kind... thanksvandana, thank you very much Ruth, many thanks for your thoughts ... regards sudhir |
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littlewing Member Rara Avis
since 2003-03-02
Posts 9655New York |
Sudhir, m'friend I have missed you and thank you for reminding me to forget *smile* xxoo |
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Sunnyone Member Ascendant
since 2000-07-06
Posts 5334Staffordshire, England |
what a fantastic write Sudhir! I always so much enjoy your thoughts shared here. And I agree...we shouldn't waste time repenting a past summer! Well done...~S~ Accept these small gifts from my gypsy heart ~S~ |
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Greeneyes
since 2000-09-09
Posts 9903In Your Poetic Mind |
HI~ I enjoyed this sir, and I love the ending....although sometimes, we do need to re visit those past summers..... hugssssLauren~ Will the wind ever remember |
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Sudhir Iyer Member Ascendant
since 2000-04-26
Posts 6943Mumbai, India : now in Belgium |
thank you all so very much regards sudhir |
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