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Shiva Laughs |
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Ericc Member Elite
since 2003-01-31
Posts 4178 |
There is no other. We appear as nothing in the eyes of a laughing Shiva. Only space that dances in the false sense of who we think we are. There is no distance between us. I am the outline to the shadow of your soul. And you are all that exists in the borders of my own. There is no other. Shiva laughs at our delusions. Yet we dance on. |
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
In the face of... Well done, Ericc. |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Ericc Good, enjoyed the read. |
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garysgirl  
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237Florida, USA |
I love your thoughts, Eric. Very good writing.  Hugs  Ethel |
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Aenimal Member Rara Avis
since 2002-11-18
Posts 7350the ass-end of space |
the Bodhisattvas look on with pity and compassion listening to prayers that we may shed our ignorance..excellent write [This message has been edited by Aenimal (10-14-2003 02:02 PM).] |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
Perhaps they are not "delusions"! Dance on and enjoy!  Happy autumn, EA |
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Tais3 New Member
since 2003-10-14
Posts 7Canada |
Very expressive. I especially like this part: I am the outline to the shadow of your soul Great work! |
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Tiersdin Member Elite
since 2000-11-17
Posts 2364east coast |
Always a pleasure to read your work... ~Tier |
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Wind
since 2002-10-12
Posts 2981 |
Shiva has always been my favorite...I love your write  What about China? Have you seen the Great Wall? |
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Mistletoe Angel
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
 (sigh) Yes indeed, maybe they're more than delusions too! (big hugggsssssss) I absolutely love studying the beliefs of other cultures, sweet friend, I deeply respect Shiva and their other chief gods, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Eric, thank you for sharing! May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton I don't need no proof when it comes to God and truth |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
Your vision, dear Eric, is captivating! Nothing holding everything. In the smile of the knowing Shiva reflects the wonderment of oneness. We dance on and the illusion slowly fades transforming into a vision of truth …. The track we leave behind is one. The dancers merged. Beautiful! I love you. Margherita |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Wonderful Eric... I so enjoy reading you! ~Smiles & Hugs, Nancy~ ~Autumn, the year's last, loveliest smile~ |
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Midnitesun
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
I dance every day, and Shiva still laughs. LOL, me too! enjoyed the write |
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KoKo Senior Member
since 2003-02-15
Posts 995Inside the shadow's shadow |
Awesome |
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Etain Member
since 2003-02-22
Posts 92The moon... |
Dear Eric, It speaks so well to me right now, I saw this vision in an image, now they speak from my soul like your poem, every trace on the skin is a word, the soul speaks in many ways. Beautious Poet! I quoted this part from your poem: "There is no distance between us. I am the outline to the shadow of your soul. And you are all that exists in the borders of my own. There is no other." Big love, Etain. |
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