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Bonnie j
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since 2003-06-27
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0 posted 2003-10-14 06:32 AM



They Say

They say you are dreaming
It’s time to let go
How can you
When you love him so
You immerse yourself in bubbles of lavender
White satin skims over milky skin
Sheets of silk
A potpourri of jasmine fills the air
As you drift into the land of dreams
You feel tender arms encircle your waiting body
A warm breath upon your cheek
A kiss as light as air
You hear words tickling your delicate ears
Not quite clear
The whisper seeming far away
As your dream fades away
You awake with a feeling of deep sorrow
You look at the pillow beside you
With a slight dent of lingering warmth
They say you are dreaming.

Love Bon-Bon

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QjQ
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1 posted 2003-10-14 07:06 AM


You look at the pillow beside you
With a slight dent of lingering warmth
They say you are dreaming.


beautiful lines in the write,,,

                                                                                   

LeeJ
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since 2003-06-19
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2 posted 2003-10-14 08:29 AM


and dreams come true...may you be blessed with all the happy ones
Good good morning...luv Lee J.

Nan
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3 posted 2003-10-14 08:35 AM


What reality didn't begin with a dream?  I like your philosophy, Bonnie j...
Cpat Hair
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4 posted 2003-10-14 08:50 AM


I believe it was perhaps Martin Luther King Jr... who made dreaming respectable and proved that dreams indeed are the beginning of reality..

may yours... come true.

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