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garysgirl
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0 posted 2003-10-14 06:12 AM



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~~*~~
When looking at our lives
and the love we happily share
Of how we love completely
and for each other care

I think of how through the years
how the classic poets of old
Wrote the ageless miracle of Love
with such beautiful grace to behold

They told of great emotions
shared between two lovers
Who gave their love and devotion
to each other like to no others

Of how for one another
they would give their lives to die
Knowing not how they would do this
nor the reasons why

They wrote of how the two desired
together to forever be
And to never a day in their lives
without their dear Love to see

Of how whenever there was space between
and they must each be apart
The poets of old wrote
how it seemed to break their heart

These emotions the classics wrote of
couples of today feel so true
We know because they are experienced
every moment by me and you
~~*~~



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[This message has been edited by garysgirl (10-14-2003 11:13 PM).]

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1 posted 2003-10-14 07:02 AM


Well our poetess of love has penned another great one!!


thanks for stopping by my site,, I checked yours and your off to a great start,,

                                                                                   

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2 posted 2003-10-14 07:11 AM


Thank you, Glenn. Did you go to the one I have listed here as my homepage? That's the one at poetrypoem.com. I've got another one that I started. This is the URL to it.....
http://ethel_gg.tripod.com/ethelslovepoetry

I don't have very many poems on it yet, though.

Hugs  
Ethel

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3 posted 2003-10-14 07:47 AM


This is wonderful, Ethel - Isn't love the greatest of all inspirations??...
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4 posted 2003-10-14 11:38 AM


Beautiful!

Eric

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5 posted 2003-10-14 11:40 AM



As poetry is, indeed.
Ethel...do you see how far
you've come?

I do.  

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6 posted 2003-10-14 11:58 AM


very nice... very...

regards
sudhir

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7 posted 2003-10-14 12:01 PM


Oh Ethel!!  Your writing continues to grow in leaps and bounds!!
This is SO very beautiful...
Another keeper for my library.
~Smiles & Hugs, Nancy~

~Autumn, the year's last, loveliest smile~

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8 posted 2003-10-14 12:02 PM


~ and I feel the very same way about you!--Oops! That must have been Gary you were referring to! tehe

Loverly!

Loves 'n hugs,
Linda

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9 posted 2003-10-14 02:39 PM


I love this garysgirl. Absolutely LOVE this. It was a great read for me this morning. My perk-me-up! Back to the top of the page you go...this belongs there for a while yet!

Remember, if you're not part of the future, you're history!

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10 posted 2003-10-14 04:18 PM






(smiles) Awwwwwwwwwwww! (kiss on cheek) I truly believe that though chivalry is rare, it lives on in some hearts and I truly believe you and Gary are one of those special chivalrous couples! (smiles) You speak with the heart of the classic romantic, sweet friend, yay, you are a gorgeous poetess, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Ethel, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

I don't need no proof when it comes to God and truth
I can see the sun set and I perceive

***Live***

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11 posted 2003-10-14 04:56 PM


nice read
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12 posted 2003-10-14 06:18 PM


passionate...beautiful!

Rf

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13 posted 2003-10-14 06:25 PM


what a beautiful expression of love....I can only envy what you share with "him" indeed love is priceless...

Lauren~


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14 posted 2003-10-14 06:46 PM


time does not cause love to change from
what it was,  it only sweetens it.

Very nicely done, Ethel.  

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15 posted 2003-10-15 02:05 AM


Oh yes, Nan...it sure is.
And thank you.
.
Thank you lots, Eric.  
.
Thanks, Karilea. You don't know how
much I appreciate your saying that.  
.
Thank you very much, Sudhir.
I'm glad that you liked it.  
.
.
I appreciate all of you.
Hugs to each of you.  
Ethel

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16 posted 2003-10-15 02:12 AM


Nancy Lee, thank you so very much.
That makes me feel good for someone
to want to keep my poems.
.
Yeppers, Linda....ALLLLL  my love
poetry refers to my Gary. But we both
know that you already knew that.  
Thanks, lady.
.
Kevin, thank you! I'm really glad
that you liked my poem. I appreciate
it very much.
.
Noah, you are always so sweet....
so very kind to every one, too.
And, Noah, I love that picture of
the unicorns. That baby one is
so precious.
Thank you very much.  
.
.
I appreciate all of you so very much.
Hugs to each of you  
Ethel

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17 posted 2003-10-15 02:23 AM


Thanks Vandana. I'm glad
that you like it.
.
Thank you, Robert. I
really appreciate that.
.
Thanks, Laureen. And yes, love
is priceless.
.
Barry, you are so right....time
sweetens love. Thank you.
.
.
I appreciate each of you very much.
Hugs to each one of you    
Ethel

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18 posted 2003-10-15 09:29 AM


Hi Garysgirl,

This is a lovely piece of poetry, very much enjoyed,

Cerenity

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19 posted 2003-10-15 10:38 AM


ethel so heartfelt and sincere

Love so true .... although apart
remaining heart to heart

Hope

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20 posted 2003-10-15 02:39 PM




Ethel, the love in your life,
and the beauty of expression
that is brought forth from it.

Will always be as beautiful,
as poetry is...


Richy



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21 posted 2003-10-15 02:50 PM


ahh Ethel:

yessss all right here
and no, you don't know why
you just DO

Of how for one another
they would give their lives to die
Knowing not how they would do this
nor the reasons why

beautiful
LittleOne
xxoo

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22 posted 2003-10-17 10:39 AM


Poetry is timeless isn't it Ethel Mae, I agree, love is written over hundreds of years, and it never changes, and never fades.

Good to read you, I miss not being around as much, as I miss you all.

Speak to you soon
love ya lots
xxxxxxxxxxx

~I wanna live, I wanna give, I've been a miner for a heart of gold~  Neil Young

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23 posted 2003-10-17 10:44 AM


Ethel, It's a timeless thing poetry and love and you share both of them wonderfully.This was enchanting, tender, and romantic.I'm glad I found this, this morning.
Crystal

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24 posted 2003-10-18 01:37 AM


Thank you, Cerenity. I'm really glad
that you liked it.  
.
Thank you, Hope. You give the sweetest
poetic sounding replies.  
.
Richy, thank you so much. That's such
a nice thing to say.  
.
.
I appreciate you all so much.  
Hugs to each of you  
Ethel

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25 posted 2003-10-18 01:44 AM


Thank you, Sue. I'm glad that you liked it.
And, doesn't it feel good to love someone
so much that you would give your life for them?
.
Hi Gemma, girl....it's good to see you, too.
And, I miss you, too, when you aren't around much.
Thanks for your sweet reply, too. And, I love
you lots, too.......
.
Thank you, Crystal. I'm really glad that you
liked my poem.
.
.
I appreciate ya'll so much.  
Hugs to all of you  
Ethel

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