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pandonov
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since 2003-10-03
Posts 478
b/w conscience and insolence

0 posted 2003-10-14 04:13 AM


tunnel.
walls of crashing inwards.
hands on eyes not to be exiled.
my shadow (left me)
dwell in isolation.
i'm still here.
groping my way
stepping over heads
and whole bodies
rummage something
i don't remember having
or ever stolen.
scream
cut through scare...
i lack reach.


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pandonov
Member
since 2003-10-03
Posts 478
b/w conscience and insolence
1 posted 2003-10-14 04:15 AM


i gadda stop for tonite. obviously i seems to wear my stupid head
Aenimal
Member Rara Avis
since 2002-11-18
Posts 7350
the ass-end of space
2 posted 2003-10-14 07:57 AM


Good write. Don't be so hard on your work. too many people worry about the perfect post, post what you feel and post freely. there is an edit button and archives where you can go back and revise or revisit poems another day. if you feel the need. at the moment worry about release and the growth will come
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