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the_loner_23
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since 2002-06-08
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Jacksonville, Florida, USA

0 posted 2003-10-13 11:40 PM


You drive up into the driveway
And walk up the steps
Unlock the front door
And walk inside

You hear the creak
Of the wood floors
As you walk room
From room

The walls are painted
All white in some rooms
But different colors
In the others

The furniture is made
Of oak (a hard wood)
The bathrooms are tiled
The bedrooms are big and spacious

In this your dream house

Cold hands means a warm heart

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1 posted 2003-10-13 11:41 PM


Not my dream house Julie, I bet it is your though?  Mine is a wood cabin just far enough from shopping LOL, and I would be one happy camper.
ThunderMage
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since 2002-06-20
Posts 812
Canada
2 posted 2003-10-13 11:42 PM


I've known that feeling... if only that dream could be real...

What is life without poetry and adventure?
"Little sister" is just another way of saying "Guardian Angel"!

Ericc
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since 2003-01-31
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3 posted 2003-10-14 11:40 AM


Very nicely done.
Eric

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