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pandonov
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since 2003-10-03
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b/w conscience and insolence

0 posted 2003-10-13 11:29 PM


dressed in lackness.
face without creation.
skin- curveless simplicity.
another ordinary being.
tossed over asphalt, to subsist.
defied by reality
yet, somehow completely real.
i feed from your pain.
suffer with your struggle.
create from your misery.
and you are so many, i could never run out of laughs.


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the_loner_23
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1 posted 2003-10-13 11:33 PM


I really enjoyed the read.

Cold hands means a warm heart

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where the wild flowers grow
2 posted 2003-10-13 11:42 PM


"i feed from your pain.
suffer with your struggle.
create from your misery.
and you are so many, i could never run out of laughs. "

...woah

Aenimal
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the ass-end of space
3 posted 2003-10-13 11:43 PM


excellent
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