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Alwye

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In the space between moments

0 posted 2003-10-13 10:31 PM

Silver moon-chariot
sweeping
across the sky…
you revel
in the same vision
as I-

Luna, cast your
shimmered
caress upon him…
liquid light
lingering, granting
every whim.

Lay down your
softest grace,
my iridescent queen…
a blanket of white
for him underneath
to dream.

Lady of the sky,
let him feel me
when I am afar…
and discover all the love
I’ve laced among
the evening stars.

Silver moon-chariot
sweeping
across the sky..
please give him
my soul
as you fly by.

~*Krista Lee Knutson*~

We are, each of us angels with only one wing; and we can only fly by embracing one another.
--Luciano De Crescenzo

Janet Marie
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1 posted 2003-10-13 11:04 PM

Luna, cast your
shimmered
caress upon him…
liquid light
lingering, granting
every whim.
====================

HEY YOU!!!!!!!!!!!!

did ya know I just love alliterations and assonance??

Love the imagery in this too...
SO good to read you again Krista-girle..tis been far too long since you wafted our way.

LOL

"Nature's first green is gold,
Her hardest hue to hold."
"So dawn goes down to day ...
Nothing gold can stay."

~Frost~

Kaz
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since 2003-10-12

Posts 26

2 posted 2003-10-13 11:07 PM

That was so beautiful.

Mysteria

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British Columbia, Canada

3 posted 2003-10-13 11:27 PM

Silver moon-chariot
sweeping
across the sky..
please give him
my soul
as you fly by.

Now, that is why I have missed your work so much - this was absolutely lovely Krista.

Sadelite
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since 2003-10-11

Posts 2519

4 posted 2003-10-13 11:30 PM

Very nicely conveyed! Thanks for posting
it.
Sadelite

Martie

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5 posted 2003-10-13 11:38 PM

Krista...The moon does make magic happen...so do words.

JamesMichael
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Kapolei, Hawaii, USA

6 posted 2003-10-15 12:29 PM

Enjoyed...James

Nan

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7 posted 2003-10-15 08:28 AM

A silvery treat... Alwye's a pleasure... Nice to see you my friend...

Cerenity'sLine
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since 2003-08-26

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8 posted 2003-10-15 09:45 AM

Hi Alwye,

Very lovely, so much enjoyed,

Cerenity

Sunshine

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Listening to every heart

9 posted 2003-10-15 09:46 AM

Lady of the sky,
let him feel me
when I am afar…
and discover all the love
I’ve laced among
the evening stars.

~*~

Yes!

Susan Caldwell
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Florida

10 posted 2003-10-15 09:49 AM

Wonderful!!

Do more?

Susan

vandana

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11 posted 2003-10-15 09:59 AM

nice read

Seymour Tabin
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Tamarac Fla

12 posted 2003-10-15 10:03 AM

Alwye
All of the above and more. Enjoyed

Alwye

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Posts 3850
In the space between moments

13 posted 2003-10-15 01:33 PM

Thanks for all the nice words everyone. It feels good to be back and to be writing poetry again...it's been a while since I've had this much creative energy. Thanks again for all the support, you guys are wonderful.

~*Krista Lee Knutson*~

We are, each of us angels with only one wing; and we can only fly by embracing one another.
--Luciano De Crescenzo

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