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ThisDiamond Member Rara Avis
since 2002-02-22
Posts 9353Michigan, USA |
Suddenly the door bangs, the tears come Hardening your stride to the edge of the water And I see you there, a solitary warrior And I know now the places that weep Moving me from uncertainty to softness I walk the windows, as you walk the lake edge Basket weaves collect the shards of me replenished Without you, there is no sky For what has cleared is worthy healing So much of you a wilderness I pray to discover Shifting through portals of push and pull away Giving rise to bubbles of warmth past my tears But somehow we are close together Leaving my sanity by the fire…I hear you with my heart Suddenly, the door bangs, the tears come And I look into the water there beside you Copyright Kkh 10/13/03 |
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inkedgoddess Member Rara Avis
since 2002-11-19
Posts 7392Ohio |
Leaving my sanity by the fire…I hear you with my heart Suddenly, the door bangs, the tears come And I look into the water there beside you i like how the whole thing comes back around and ties up like this, very lovely |
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
...And I see you there, a solitary warrior ...Basket weaves collect the shards of me replenished ...Shifting through portals of push and pull away ...And I look into the water there beside you ~*~ Kathleen - this was what I was trying to say. Thank you! |
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wordwizard Member
since 2003-09-08
Posts 483on the way to next world |
Hi Kathleen, Enjoy the way you've phrased this poem, lots of depth in your words...enjoyed Martin aka ecrivan |
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the_loner_23 Member Ascendant
since 2002-06-08
Posts 5479Jacksonville, Florida, USA |
This is a very deep poem. But it was beautifully written. Cold hands means a warm heart |
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Magnus
since 2001-10-10
Posts 14135South Carolina, USA |
Each step a new journey, each tear a new cleansing. Each beat, a new beginning as love deepens yet pulls away... Beautiful write K. Thank You! |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Beautifully expressed Kathleen. ~Smiles & Hugs, Nancy~ ~Autumn, the year's last, loveliest smile~ |
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BluesSerenade Member Patricius
since 2001-10-23
Posts 10549By the Seaside |
Without you, there is no sky For what has cleared is worthy healing So much of you a wilderness I pray to discover Shifting through portals of push and pull away Giving rise to bubbles of warmth past my tears And I look into the water there beside you!!! Oh my, bless your sweet heart Kathleen! Your thoughts are cleansing and always so beautiful to me. |
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Jason Lyle Senior Member
since 2003-02-07
Posts 1438With my darkling |
Very nice poem, I loved the way you wrote this. Jason |
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Gentle Spirit Member Patricius
since 2000-10-09
Posts 13989 |
But somehow we are close together Leaving my sanity by the fire…I hear you with my heart Suddenly, the door bangs, the tears come And I look into the water there beside you sigh...so sad but so beautiful at the same time. Very well done. |
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LeeJ Member Patricius
since 2003-06-19
Posts 13296 |
I hear you with my heart and feel your passion, alive, in comfort and informational truth...true love, true love Awesome write... |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
sadly beautiful |
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vandana
since 1999-10-22
Posts 10463USA |
nice  |
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