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RunningWolf
Junior Member
since 2003-09-14
Posts 24
Michigan USA

0 posted 2003-10-13 08:07 PM



tip  tap  tip  tap
tip  tap  tip  tap
tip  tap  tip  tap
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boom boom boom boom boom
boom boom boom boom boom

squeek squeek squeek squeek

..........

tip  tap  tip  tap
tip  tap  tip  tap   (dripping water)
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boom boom boom boom boom
boom boom boom boom boom  (stomping)

squeek squeek squeek squeek  (wrench)

...............(silence)

spishhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh    (spraying water)

squeek squeek squeek squeek
squeek squeek squeek squeek
squeek squeek squeek squeek
sqeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeek


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zzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzz     (giving up and goin back to bed)

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PsychoticBunni
Member
since 2003-10-03
Posts 162
Mythical Atlantis
1 posted 2003-10-13 08:22 PM


leaky faucets always are annoying. lol.

Meg

Meg- And the Texan pushed the Mexican out of the plane and screamed, "Long live the ALAMO!!!!!!!!!"

SharaRose
Member Elite
since 2003-07-19
Posts 2501
Somewhere out there~
2 posted 2003-10-13 09:31 PM


They do drive you crazy...
Love,
Terri~

Of sound, and speech let all lift the hearer!

Bonnie j
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since 2003-06-27
Posts 1588
Ohio
3 posted 2003-10-13 09:43 PM


The drip, drip, drip gets louder and louder.
You toss and turn, cannot sleep. Drip, drip,drip. Cover your head with a pillow, but that ole drip grows louder through the pillow. What a nightmare.
Interesting poem.
See Ya Bon-Bon

KoKo
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since 2003-02-15
Posts 995
Inside the shadow's shadow
4 posted 2003-10-15 02:02 AM


lol, that was cool
GG
Member Elite
since 2002-12-03
Posts 3532
Lost in thought
5 posted 2003-10-15 02:09 AM


agh, I'm annoyed just reading the poem! lol

Always, Alyssa

- And so it was that time stood still -
     (blink, breathe, stand, fight)

RunningWolf
Junior Member
since 2003-09-14
Posts 24
Michigan USA
6 posted 2003-10-23 05:05 PM


well i have been everywhere but here lately. guess music is keeping me busy. thanks for the comments. RunningWolfsLilGirl i wrote you something.
thank you all for visiting my poems.
submitting a poem here is like tossing out your line and the comments being the fish who get curious.

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