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James McInerney
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0 posted 2003-10-13 05:43 PM


Its the little things that make us smile.....
The feeling of warmth when you cuddle up so close to the one that you love, the way that she holds onto you with all of her love, so close, as though nothing else could matter, or seem more important from the moment you hold her to the second that you let her go.
When you`re standing right in front of her looking deep into her eyes, as though you could see forever. The way a soul mate sees the future, knowing in a split second that this stranger before them is thier life, the way forward..


If you dont know what the little things are, then you need to stop and take notice of the things around you or they will pass you by.

James



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1 posted 2003-10-13 09:37 PM


much truth in this write

if you could break up some of the lines,
do a little bit of editing, it could read more as poetry than prose

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