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Strength Of Strings (Littlewing & Wranx)
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Strength Of Strings (Littlewing & Wranx) |
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littlewing Member Rara Avis
since 2003-03-02
Posts 9655New York 
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Through withered leaves of rose and tree lined paths do drift and meet stirring rising beneath the sky Egress, to a way around the stinging thorns and snatching branches that try to bar A cord thus drawn from wrist to hand and hand to wrist and back again four points crossed with silken twine to bind thy soul for evermore two hands, now joined to tempt the fates that would dare to test the strength of strings |
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El_Campeador Senior Member
since 2003-01-29
Posts 761Ohio, USA |
Wow! Another excellent duet to add to my library... Good job, you two! “We are all travelers in the wilderness of this world, and the best that we can find in our travels is an honest friend.” –Robert Louis Stevenson |
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Robert Frazier Senior Member
since 2003-02-06
Posts 1014 |
wonderful! poignant! is it but will that binds and unbinds these strings? Rf |
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Local Parasite
since 2001-11-05
Posts 2527Transylconia, Winnipeg |
Ahh, here's something that accurately portrays both of your talents in a wonderfully harmonic collaboration... I can see Ed's cache of wisdom glowing through with Suzie's ever-fresh and reverent perspective... You two create something beautiful, in poetry and also, I'm sure, in each other's lives. Thank you for sharing your experience with us. Brian Faith is a fine invention |
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Midnitesun
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
 now you know, this will probably be my favorite post of this day love this stringed duet |
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Martie
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
Sue and Ed...The string is as strong as what it ties together. A stunning duet! |
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Even a violin string might not give off as sweet a sound as this lovely ... Well done... |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Oh my....so beautiful you two! If this isn't love then I don't know what is!  ~Hugs and kudos to you both~ ~Autumn, the year's last, loveliest smile~ |
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Mysteria
since 2001-03-07
Posts 18328British Columbia, Canada |
I am knot crying from reading this one - no I am not! However I do have something in my eye, it's called a view of purity and love! Now pass that  Oh brother you two! You make the sweetest poetry ever! |
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Aenimal Member Rara Avis
since 2002-11-18
Posts 7350the ass-end of space |
what can i say that hasn't been said, simply stunning and beautiful may life echoe art |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
tossing rice! A lovely and touching handfasting m'friends. Love you both.  |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
These are strings of love, you are One. So beautiful! Love and hugs. Margherita  |
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wranx Member Elite
since 2002-06-07
Posts 3689Moved from a shack to a barn |
Thanks to all that take the time to read our ramblings. We both love the idea of a handfasting. (We'll just need a willing witch to do the honors) Thanks for posting this Baby  |
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littlewing Member Rara Avis
since 2003-03-02
Posts 9655New York |
Thanks Ben - good to see you reading Robert yes will EXACTLY thank you Brian, you are so sweet thank you so much *smiling here* and for the most sincere and beautiful words I have read . . . *still smiling* xxoo ahhh Kacy . . . I sure do hope it was stringed . . that was good thank you Martie God yes, you got it only as strong as what it ties beautiful thank you Ohh Kari . . . Goodness that was beautiful I am blushing here Thank you so much mann . . . Nancy . . . thank you Sharon, Ohh My . . . . Goodness . . . you have made me smile here . . . not that this made you sad, I am not THAT sadistic you know why . . . what a beautiful person you are  Raph? may life echo art . . . Jesus, that is beautiful thank you . . . I mean it you know I do *smiling* xxoo K - LMAOOO I love you, you know that? (even though birds explode when they eat rice, would be a short life for me *smile*) YOU just may be one busy Lady Margherita , truly one thank you soo much Ed? your welcome how could I not? It belongs with the breeze . . . and uhhh . . Nawlins huh? *smile* |
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dreambuilder Member
since 2003-03-23
Posts 319caddyshack |
bump |
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icebox Member Elite
since 2003-05-03
Posts 4383in the shadows |
Of all the rituals, I think I like doing handfastings the best. A great poetic statement. Thank you for sharing it. |
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A Romantic Heart Member Ascendant
since 1999-09-03
Posts 5496Forever In Your Heart |
Beautifully written, a wonderful love shared! ~ARH  |
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EvocativeVerse2 Senior Member
since 2003-09-10
Posts 1279 |
Yikes this is great! My #1 must read of the day. Heck it must be read again so I am off to re-read it. Wonderfully done. Remember, if you're not part of the future, you're history! |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
May I echo all of the above! You two have one beautiful poetic heart!  & Linda |
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Sudhir Iyer Member Ascendant
since 2000-04-26
Posts 6943Mumbai, India : now in Belgium |
thank you for this... thank you both... regards sudhir |
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Mistletoe Angel
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
(sigh) Oh Sue and Wranx, this is a gorgeous duet, sweet friends, I believe string and twine only grows thicker and more flexible when spun around the working, caring fingers, yay, I love it! (big group hug) God Bless You All, yay, we all love you so much! You have such bautiful hearts, sweet Sue and Wranx, thank you for sharing! May love and light always shine upon you both! Love, Noah Eaton I don't need no proof when it comes to God and truth |
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Richy Member Elite
since 2003-05-03
Posts 3050 |
Some believe that the whole universe is made up of one big pile of strings... From the power and beauty from love such as this... I’m starting to think they might have something there... Thank you two, always, for holding us all together... Richy |
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vandana
since 1999-10-22
Posts 10463USA |
nice write |
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Tiersdin Member Elite
since 2000-11-17
Posts 2364east coast |
I can't believe that I'd missed this. *smiles* see what love can create? ~Tier |
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angelblueyes Member Elite
since 2003-07-19
Posts 2148Oklahoma |
Love can create such wonderful things.You two are wonderful, passionate, and tenderhearted united as one and it's lovely to see. Crystal |
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inkedgoddess Member Rara Avis
since 2002-11-19
Posts 7392Ohio |
sorry i missed this, ive been in and out of here lately i know i read, but didnt realize till now i forgot to leave my signature too. exquisite strings of hearts are tender as new lovers seamed together embroidered lightly in a basting stitch in its test of strenght made for heaven's forever peace and sunshine, feel the floyd [This message has been edited by inkedgoddess (10-17-2003 12:58 PM).] |
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Kaoru
since 2003-06-07
Posts 3892where the wild flowers grow |
Y'all are so wonderful together |
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LeeJ Member Patricius
since 2003-06-19
Posts 13296 |
A cord thus drawn from wrist to hand and hand to wrist You are a poetic wonder....when are you going to do a book? Lovely smile in all of your writes and the pic to....your a beautiful gal...in my book. Have a wonderful weekend  |
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vlraynes Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-25
Posts 8229Somewhere... out there... |
Sorry I'm late, you two... but you KNOW I'm smiling huge at this... A lovely handfasting, indeed... Gawd, you two are beautiful... Love you both... When the power of love overcomes the |
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PouringJewels Member
since 2003-09-18
Posts 158Maryland |
I can twine any string and make it beauty. I have a true witching gift. The good witch of course! You have this way with words. |
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Ratleader
since 2003-01-23
Posts 7026Visiting Earth on a Guest Pass |
What a beautiful match....of talent and everything else. It just shines out of you! ~~(¸¸¸¸ºº> ~~(¸¸¸¸ºº> ~~(¸¸ ¸¸ºº> ~~~(¸¸ER¸¸ºº> |
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littlewing Member Rara Avis
since 2003-03-02
Posts 9655New York |
Thanks for the bump Mike *smile* Hey icey *smile* knew there was something to you . . . thank you AR - yes indeed thank you so much Hey Verse - wow very cool thank you so much! awww Linda that was so sweet thank you Sudhir, m'friend thank you for reading such sweet words you always have Thanks Noah and yes sooo very true awww Richy - so very sweet of you . . My God thank you Thank you V! Tier? yes, I do . . thank you so much Crystal I just what I neede to hear today thank you Michele? you have something here Lady . . . exquisite strings of hearts are tender as new lovers seamed together embroidered lightly in a basting stitch in its test of strenght made for heaven's forever weave it please what a beautiful response thank you so much (feel the Floyd lol) aww Meg thank you so much Lee Oh My what a beautiful response goodness 'I am blushing over here . . . thank you so very much Vicky, me sis , yes I do know . . . and thank you for you *smile* Julia . . . I have been given a gift . . truly *smile* thank you aww Ed thank you so much . . . *smile* thanks guys xxoo |
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Dark Angel Member Patricius
since 1999-08-04
Posts 10095 |
"The string is as strong as what it ties together" Martie is right! A most moving collaboration, Well done both Brother Ed and LittleOne, I couldn't tell who wrote what. Maree fate is not just |
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littlewing Member Rara Avis
since 2003-03-02
Posts 9655New York |
Maree? from you that means the world to me, truly (I think it is Ed *smile*) thank you xxoo |
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