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Bewitching Hour (old one never posted)

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Susan Caldwell
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0 posted 10-13-2003 02:55 PM       View Profile for Susan Caldwell   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to Submit your Poem to Passions  View IP for Susan Caldwell


I have decided
not to play
fair

so I stand before
an alter
because I just won't share

I loved you before her
and in my mind
you belong to me

so I will mix
a potion
so you may finally see

now, i have not done this before
and very well could fail
so if you come out with an extra ear

well, have no fear
I'll call the Serene one
to fix what I hold dear

© Copyright 2003 Susan Caldwell - All Rights Reserved
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1 posted 10-13-2003 03:02 PM       View Profile for Midnitesun   Email Midnitesun   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Midnitesun

I love it!
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2 posted 10-13-2003 03:09 PM       View Profile for Cpat Hair   Email Cpat Hair   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Cpat Hair

LMAO.. so it begins.. from Satan van to witches spell... what is going to happen when that van goes away??? More spells...
Sunnyone
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3 posted 10-13-2003 03:11 PM       View Profile for Sunnyone   Email Sunnyone   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Sunnyone's Home Page   View IP for Sunnyone

Hi Susan, and I think this is great...I love the part about the extra ear!  Was born within a few seconds of Halloween, so I enjoy the thoughts of conjuring up spells and potions!  Careful with the hair of toad powder, ok?  If you need any help with the mix, let me know!!!!  LOL!!!  ~S~

Accept these small gifts from my gypsy heart  ~S~

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4 posted 10-13-2003 03:13 PM       View Profile for Sunshine   Email Sunshine   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Sunshine's Home Page   View IP for Sunshine

ROFL...but what if Serenity
has the phone off the hook?
Oh My....
well, just as well for the season,
right, Susan?
Robert Frazier
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5 posted 10-13-2003 03:15 PM       View Profile for Robert Frazier   Email Robert Frazier   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Robert Frazier

Clever!

she was passing out "extras"
but have no fear
there are things much worse
she could add to your head, friend,
i'm certain,
than an ear!

Rf
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6 posted 10-13-2003 04:41 PM       View Profile for Edder   Email Edder   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Edder

Note to self: DO NOT get on Susan's bad side.
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7 posted 10-13-2003 06:35 PM       View Profile for serenity blaze   Email serenity blaze   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for serenity blaze

LMAO...I wish I HAD a spell to add, um, APPENDAGES!!!

Or at least ENHANCE the existing...oh, well, you get the idea!

(double bubble, triple trouble?)

grins, Susan. Gawd I love ya!

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8 posted 10-13-2003 08:16 PM       View Profile for QjQ   Email QjQ   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for QjQ

enjoyed,,,,

                                                                                   

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9 posted 10-13-2003 08:24 PM       View Profile for Magnus   Email Magnus   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Magnus

Something told me that Serenity would have
to add her two....errrr, cents to this....

While you add something else....

this is cute, enjoyed.... (checking to see
if I have a third ear yet)!!!
Duncan
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10 posted 10-13-2003 09:19 PM       View Profile for Duncan   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Duncan

"so I will mix
a potion
so you may finally see

now, i have not done this before
and very well could fail
so if you come out with an extra ear

well, have no fear
I'll call the Serene one
to fix what I hold dear"

Geez...and I thought the blondes were scary!!  

You can't start a fire
you can't start a fire without a spark
This gun's for hire
even if we're just dancing in the dark

Bruce Springsteen

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11 posted 10-13-2003 09:47 PM       View Profile for Greeneyes   Email Greeneyes   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Greeneyes

sweet little write....the serene one is a great one to have on your side....
hugsss
Lauren~

Susan Caldwell
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12 posted 10-14-2003 01:10 PM       View Profile for Susan Caldwell   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Susan Caldwell

Kacy~Thank you!

Ron~Yes..dang it..I have tried everything else..I am sick of the chaos.

Sunnyone~Yes thank you! I will keep you in mind!

Karilea~Karen will answer..b/c she will know!  

RF~LOL thank you!

Eddie~lol..I am really just an innocent sweet thing!

Karen~Yea, if that were possible..it would have already been done...over and over again.
Love you back!

Q~Thank you!

Magnus~It won't be an ear for you!!

Duncan~No, it's always been the redheads!

Lauren~No doubt!  Thanks...
EvocativeVerse2
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13 posted 10-14-2003 02:46 PM       View Profile for EvocativeVerse2   Email EvocativeVerse2   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for EvocativeVerse2

I almost missed this one today Susan. Glad I did not! I love the title and the way you pulled your thoughts together. I might have to borrow the very bases of the concept and see what I can weave with a title called the Bewitching Hour. Thanks!

Remember, if you're not part of the future, you're history!

Brad Majors
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14 posted 11-24-2003 04:17 PM       View Profile for Brad Majors   Email Brad Majors   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Brad Majors

Can't believe I missed this one
 
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