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Susan Caldwell
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0 posted 2003-10-13 02:55 PM



I have decided
not to play
fair

so I stand before
an alter
because I just won't share

I loved you before her
and in my mind
you belong to me

so I will mix
a potion
so you may finally see

now, i have not done this before
and very well could fail
so if you come out with an extra ear

well, have no fear
I'll call the Serene one
to fix what I hold dear


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1 posted 2003-10-13 03:02 PM


I love it!
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2 posted 2003-10-13 03:09 PM


LMAO.. so it begins.. from Satan van to witches spell... what is going to happen when that van goes away??? More spells...
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3 posted 2003-10-13 03:11 PM


Hi Susan, and I think this is great...I love the part about the extra ear!  Was born within a few seconds of Halloween, so I enjoy the thoughts of conjuring up spells and potions!  Careful with the hair of toad powder, ok?  If you need any help with the mix, let me know!!!!  LOL!!!  ~S~

Accept these small gifts from my gypsy heart  ~S~

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4 posted 2003-10-13 03:13 PM


ROFL...but what if Serenity
has the phone off the hook?
Oh My....
well, just as well for the season,
right, Susan?

Robert Frazier
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5 posted 2003-10-13 03:15 PM


Clever!

she was passing out "extras"
but have no fear
there are things much worse
she could add to your head, friend,
i'm certain,
than an ear!

Rf

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6 posted 2003-10-13 04:41 PM


Note to self: DO NOT get on Susan's bad side.
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7 posted 2003-10-13 06:35 PM


LMAO...I wish I HAD a spell to add, um, APPENDAGES!!!

Or at least ENHANCE the existing...oh, well, you get the idea!

(double bubble, triple trouble?)

grins, Susan. Gawd I love ya!


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8 posted 2003-10-13 08:16 PM


enjoyed,,,,

                                                                                   

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9 posted 2003-10-13 08:24 PM


Something told me that Serenity would have
to add her two....errrr, cents to this....

While you add something else....

this is cute, enjoyed.... (checking to see
if I have a third ear yet)!!!

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10 posted 2003-10-13 09:19 PM


"so I will mix
a potion
so you may finally see

now, i have not done this before
and very well could fail
so if you come out with an extra ear

well, have no fear
I'll call the Serene one
to fix what I hold dear"

Geez...and I thought the blondes were scary!!  

You can't start a fire
you can't start a fire without a spark
This gun's for hire
even if we're just dancing in the dark

Bruce Springsteen

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11 posted 2003-10-13 09:47 PM


sweet little write....the serene one is a great one to have on your side....
hugsss
Lauren~


Susan Caldwell
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12 posted 2003-10-14 01:10 PM


Kacy~Thank you!

Ron~Yes..dang it..I have tried everything else..I am sick of the chaos.

Sunnyone~Yes thank you! I will keep you in mind!

Karilea~Karen will answer..b/c she will know!  

RF~LOL thank you!

Eddie~lol..I am really just an innocent sweet thing!

Karen~Yea, if that were possible..it would have already been done...over and over again.
Love you back!

Q~Thank you!

Magnus~It won't be an ear for you!!

Duncan~No, it's always been the redheads!

Lauren~No doubt!  Thanks...

EvocativeVerse2
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13 posted 2003-10-14 02:46 PM


I almost missed this one today Susan. Glad I did not! I love the title and the way you pulled your thoughts together. I might have to borrow the very bases of the concept and see what I can weave with a title called the Bewitching Hour. Thanks!

Remember, if you're not part of the future, you're history!

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14 posted 2003-11-24 04:17 PM


Can't believe I missed this one
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