Three words from your lips

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Robert Frazier
Senior Member

since 2003-02-06

Posts 1014

0 posted 2003-10-13 02:50 PM

I imagined three words from your lips
on my ears, fell, and borrowed from
your sweet breath to lift high my spirit
above the sad discourse of a broken will
till twisted cords of life beat against
the wings of my desires
And the sum of what I can think,
till all these longings sink
deep, and deeper still
beneath the gentle waves of
"I love you"

Sunnyone
Member Ascendant

since 2000-07-06

Posts 5334
Staffordshire, England

1 posted 2003-10-13 03:21 PM

Oh Robert, this is absolutely gorgeous! Sometimes it's hard to believe how very powerful those three little words really are...~S~

Accept these small gifts from my gypsy heart ~S~

Enchantress
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since 2001-08-14

Posts 35113
Canada eh.

2 posted 2003-10-13 03:21 PM

There are no words more beautiful...than "I love you"
and this says it perfectly Robert.
~Smiles & Hugs, Nancy~

~Autumn, the year's last, loveliest smile~

1slick_lady
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since 2000-12-22

Posts 6088
standing on a shadow's lace

3 posted 2003-10-13 08:18 PM

ahhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh

ThisDiamond
Member Rara Avis

since 2002-02-22

Posts 9353
Michigan, USA

4 posted 2003-10-13 11:04 PM

Love is all the wonder, in the palm of our hearts. Wonderful write. TD

Kaz
Junior Member

since 2003-10-12

Posts 26

5 posted 2003-10-13 11:12 PM

wow, that was so beautiful, and nicely written. It makes me want to go whisper
'I love you' in someone's ear now. lol.

Rosebud1229
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since 2000-04-05

Posts 1813
North Carolina

6 posted 2003-10-14 02:37 AM

wow, beautifully written and your so right theres no three stronger words that I love you.

ShakespearesSister
Junior Member

since 2003-10-14

Posts 24

7 posted 2003-10-14 03:36 AM

words are beautiful even more when action of the heart is behind them.

Lovely thoughts*

passing shadows
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since 1999-08-26

Posts 45577
displaced

8 posted 2003-10-14 04:05 AM

now that is pure emotion

Nan

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Member Seraphic

since 1999-05-20

Posts 21191
Cape Cod Massachusetts USA

9 posted 2003-10-14 08:24 AM

It makes the world go round... So much for gravity!!...

Earth Angel
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since 2002-08-27

Posts 40215
Realms of Light

10 posted 2003-10-14 08:55 AM

Your poem certainly does illustrate the power of those words! "I love you"--words that one never tires of hearing...

A lovely poem, Robert!

Warm, autumnal hugs,
EA

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